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Line vs. Line

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Don't be afraid of me,
Don't be ashamed.
Walk in the way of my soft resurrection.
Idol of roses, iconic soul.
I know your name.
Lead me to war with your brilliant direction

 

vs

 

But if you hold me without hurting me
You’ll be the first whoever did

 

Whoa, that’s a long “line” :toofunny:

 

Clampi this is MY thread don't you DARE come here and tell me my LINES are VERSES that's INSANE :hooker:

 

Love you girl :kiss3:


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My dreams are bigger than your junkie pride

Vs

Greenwich I need you

Strangled up in ivy

I’m the garden of eden

Lady liberty


Hell, I Suppose if You Stick Around Long Enough, They Have to Say Something Nice About You

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'Cause even in the dark, I feel your resistance

You can see my heart burning in the distance 

 

Vs

 

I guess it's symptomatic of this slight infatuation
Stalking you has sorta become like my occupation


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" 'Cause even in the dark, I feel your resistance

You can see my heart burning in the distance"

 

vs

 

"I put the radio on, hold you tight in my mind

Isn't strange that you're not here with me"


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'Cause even in the dark, I feel your resistance

You can see my heart burning in the distance

vs.

You count to three while they’re all dying

You’re hard to reach, you’re cold to touch


If by not 'up to par' you mean distilling the worst elements that only kind of work in songs, sure. I could put a dictionary audiobook on shuffle and put it to an instrumental of old money and some of y'all would still be saying it's 50/50 lmfao.

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