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#21 OFFLINE   Cult Leader

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Posted 08 May 2018 - 01:05 AM

"Lead me to war with your brilliant direction"

 

vs. 

 

"I would do anything for you babe. Blessed is this union. Crying tears of gold like lemonade"



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Posted 08 May 2018 - 10:34 AM

“Lead me to war with your brilliant direction”

vs

“My rose garden dreams, set on fire by fiends”

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Posted 08 May 2018 - 10:36 AM

“Lead me to war with your brilliant direction” 

 

vs 

 

"Life rocked me like Motley, grabbed me by the ribbons in my hair"


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Posted 08 May 2018 - 10:41 AM

"Life rocked me like Motley, grabbed me by the ribbons in my hair"

 
vs.
 
"The headlights from passing cars illuminate my face then leave me the dark"

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#25 ONLINE   Lonely Lolita

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Posted 08 May 2018 - 10:43 AM

“The headlights from passing cars illuminate my face then leave me the dark"

vs
“My boyfriend’s pretty cool, but he’s not as cool as me”

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#26 OFFLINE   Body Electrician

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Posted 08 May 2018 - 10:49 AM

“The headlights from passing cars illuminate my face then leave me the dark"

 

vs. 

 

"I was so wrong not to trust your Medellín tangerine dreams"


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#27 OFFLINE   LonelyLolitaMotel

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Posted 08 May 2018 - 01:03 PM

“The headlights from passing cars illuminate my face then leave me the dark"

 

vs

 

"And you can't keep your hands off me, or your pants on"


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Posted 08 May 2018 - 01:27 PM

“The headlights from passing cars illuminate my face then leave me the dark"

 

vs

 

"He signs XO, hugs, hey
I know it's true love cause my heart goes yay" :hooker: 


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#29 OFFLINE   LonelyLolitaMotel

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Posted 08 May 2018 - 07:30 PM

"He signs XO, hugs, hey
I know it's true love cause my heart goes yay"

 

vs

 

"He doesn't mind I have a flat broke down life,

In fact he says he thinks it's what he might like about me,

admires me, the way I roll like a rolling stone"


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Posted 08 May 2018 - 08:22 PM

"He doesn't mind I have a flat broke down life,

In fact he says he thinks it's what he might like about me,

admires me, the way I roll like a rolling stone"

 

vs

 

''All the lights in Miami begin to gleam, ruby, blue and green, neon too

Everything looks better from above, my king, like aquamarine, ocean's blue''


My body is stuck in the ocean~~~tumblr_oo739iaDzM1v31k7mo1_500.png My mind is lost in the universe*** 


#31 ONLINE   Lonely Lolita

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Posted 08 May 2018 - 08:33 PM

"He doesn't mind I have a flat broke down life,
In fact he says he thinks it's what he might like about me,
admires me, the way I roll like a rolling stone"

vs

“Whitman is my daddy, Monica's my mother
Diamonds are my bestest friend
Heaven is my baby, suicide's her father
Opulence is the end”

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#32 OFFLINE   MrLunknown

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Posted 08 May 2018 - 08:46 PM

“Whitman is my daddy, Monica's my mother
Diamonds are my bestest friend
Heaven is my baby, suicide's her father
Opulence is the end” 

 

vs

 

"Well, I didn't know it would come to this

But that's what happens when you're on your own

And You're alright

With letting nice things go"



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Posted 08 May 2018 - 08:55 PM

"Well, I didn't know it would come to this

But that's what happens when you're on your own

And You're alright

With letting nice things go"

 

VS

 

"In the name of higher consciousness

I let the best man I knew go

Cause it's nice to love and be loved

But it's better to know all you can know"


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#34 OFFLINE   Body Electrician

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Posted 08 May 2018 - 08:57 PM

nnn not this turning into verse vs. verse

 

"Well, I didn't know it would come to this

But that's what happens when you're on your own

And You're alright

With letting nice things go"

 

vs.

 

"Sometimes I wake up in the morning to red, blue and yellow lies

On Monday they destroyed me but by Friday I'm revived"


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Posted 08 May 2018 - 09:01 PM

"Sometimes I wake up in the morning to red, blue and yellow lies

On Monday they destroyed me but by Friday I'm revived"

 

vs

 

''My baby lives in shades of blue, blue eyes, blue jazz and attitude

 He lives in California too, he drives a Chevy Malibu''


My body is stuck in the ocean~~~tumblr_oo739iaDzM1v31k7mo1_500.png My mind is lost in the universe*** 


#36 ONLINE   Lonely Lolita

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Posted 08 May 2018 - 09:24 PM

'My baby lives in shades of blue, blue eyes, blue jazz and attitude
He lives in California too, he drives a Chevy Malibu''
vs
“Topanga’s hot tonight
The city by the bay
Has movie stars and liquor stores and soft decay”

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Posted 09 May 2018 - 10:39 AM

“Topanga’s hot tonight, the city by the bay 
Has movie stars and liquor stores and soft decay” 

 

vs.

 

"Hello heaven, you are a tunnel lined with yellow lights on a dark night"


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#38 OFFLINE   Kitschesque

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Posted 09 May 2018 - 10:50 AM

“Topanga’s hot tonight, the city by the bay
Has movie stars and liquor stores and soft decay”

 

vs

 

"And I don't mind living on bread and oranges, no, no
But I gotta get to and from where I come
And it's gonna take money to go"


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#39 ONLINE   Lonely Lolita

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Posted 09 May 2018 - 11:02 AM

“Topanga’s hot tonight, the city by the bay
Has movie stars and liquor stores and soft decay”
Vs
“You got that medicine I need, fame liquor love give it to me slowly”

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#40 OFFLINE   LonelyLolitaMotel

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Posted 09 May 2018 - 02:12 PM

“You got that medicine I need, fame liquor love give it to me slowly” 

 

vs

 

"Nothing gold can stay like love or lemonade

Or sun or summer days

It's all a game to me anyway"


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