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Lana's Songs as Haikus

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that Nirvana guy

sings that "Come As You Are" song

the fuck is his name

 

 

ELVIS is the king

TOM PETTY sings that not him

Springsteen is the BOSS

 

 

Tune's Radiohead

Who stole it from The Hollies'

"The Air That I Breathe"

 

 

i suck at guitar

and affirmative consent

we're superficial


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Stalking you has sorta become like my occupation.

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On 4/26/2022 at 2:39 PM, Diamantes said:

Not a paragraph, try to avoid commas and all that. 

One sentence that'll convince someone to look her discography up. 

Ok, go! 

There was a "Lana songs as Haiku" thread once, which could do what you suggest with more constraints, if the song were representative enough of her, but I can't find the thread for some reason. At any rate you're supposed to pose a song as a Haiku and then people have to guess what it is. Can't remember if I posted this or not (am thinking not).

 

Your mind is enthralled
My bad singings and hijinks
Send you to heaven

 

(hints: unreleased song, sung in the 1st person).

Imagine a semi-colon after "enthralled", and it kind of (technically) works, even if it's cheating a bit.

 

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10 hours ago, slang said:

There was a "Lana songs as Haiku" thread once, which could do what you suggest with more constraints, if the song were representative enough of her, but I can't find the thread for some reason. At any rate you're supposed to pose a song as a Haiku and then people have to guess what it is. Can't remember if I posted this or not (am thinking not).

 

Your mind is enthralled
My bad singings and hijinks
Send you to heaven

 

(hints: unreleased song, sung in the 1st person).

Imagine a semi-colon after "enthralled", and it kind of (technically) works, even if it's cheating a bit.

 

I like that, by all means, haiku some descriptions up I don't mind. 

your green mind enthralled,
by my comet soul and songs
sends you rite higher

a little word remixing


UV/Honeymoon

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