PARADIXO 31,450 Posted August 20, 2014 Hey guys! Well, I'm a songwriter and I see you all appreciate this kind of things so I want to share them with you. I write songs since 2010 (they were too bad to be honest lol, I was like 12) but I think I'm a really good songwriter right now. The first "decent" song I wrote is called "With Me" and I wrote it back in 2012. So, I want you to read "Those Sad Lips", a very beautiful track I made last month. It's an alternative rock song produced by Tom Bailey and me. I'd really like to post the MP3 but my voice is...... lol THOSE SAD LIPS I'm sorry, I didn't want to hurt you I'm sorry, I didn't know your mind was fucked up I'm sorry I don't want to see your eyes like that Don't want you to fake a smile Long story I don't want you to feel alone Don't want you to feel like a broken soul Go stand there in the light Be an angel, that's what you are Crazy, messed up That's how I like Never miss a chance to smile Try to not spend time with me Now you've got more reasons to live Bad, dark That's how I am And I don't want you to be sad To be sad, like me Don't be sad Don't be sad, for me I almost killed you My words, they were knives for you I'm sorry I know it was my blame, but I love you It's too late Now I can't see your eyes again My soul's too dark to see you I hear your voice But I can't tell you a single word 'Cause I don't want you to feel alone Go stand there in the light Be an angel, that's what you are Crazy, messed up That's how I like Never miss a chance to smile Try to not spend time with me Now you've got more reasons to live Bad, dark That's how I am And I don't want you to be sad To be sad, like me Don't be sad Don't be sad, for me Yeah, I hurt you one time But I killed you twice "Come as you are", it was literal I didn't know you that well But babe, we're now soul-mates "Come as you are", it was literal Oh yeah it was Sad lips, sad lips! Don't look at me like that Sad lips, sad lips! You kill me... Go stand there in the light Be an angel, that's what you are Crazy, messed up That's how I like Never miss a chance to smile Try to not spend time with me Now you've got more reasons to live Bad, dark That's how I am And I don't want you to be sad To be sad, like me Don't be sad Don't be sad, for me Thoughts? 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
HEARTCORE 18,829 Posted August 20, 2014 I really like it! Very dark and powerful! I'd lovvve to hear the MP3 of it. (btw - 'sad lips' HELLO LANA) 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PARADIXO 31,450 Posted August 20, 2014 I really like it! Very dark and powerful! I'd lovvve to hear the MP3 of it. (btw - 'sad lips' HELLO LANA) Yes it is a VERY dark and powerful song! Thank you 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TRENCH 15,340 Posted August 21, 2014 I read the lyrics to the Lolita instrumental ButI would like to hear the song, the lyrics are good 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PARADIXO 31,450 Posted August 21, 2014 I read the lyrics to the Lolita instrumental ButI would like to hear the song, the lyrics are good omg lmaoooooo 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Chris Cuomo 3,315 Posted August 22, 2014 those sad lips would be a lot happier w some juvēderm injections!! 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
