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think i'll miss you forever

like the stars miss the sun in the morning sky

 

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I put the radio on hold you tight in my mind
Isn't strange that you're not here with me
But I know the light's on in the television 

Trying to transmit, can you hear me
 


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the greatest loss of them all!

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think i'll miss you forever

like the stars miss the sun in the morning sky


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Sometimes it feels like I've got a war in my mind
I wanna get off, but I keep riding the ride
I never really noticed that I had to decide
To play someone's game, or live my own life


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I'm flying to the moon again
Dreaming about heroin
How it gave you everything and took your life away

 

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Dive in, dive deep and dive blue, my sweet

Rushing up from the water where the ice meets 


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I'm flying to the moon again
Dreaming about heroin
How it gave you everything and took your life away

 

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I can feel it coming in the air tonight
See you walking on that blue Pacific
I can see you bathing in the summer light
Turning tan and you look terrific


Californ-I-A homeland of the Gods

Once I found my way

But now I am lost

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can feel it coming in the air tonight
See you walking on that blue Pacific
I can see you bathing in the summer light
Turning tan and you look terrific

 

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Loving you isn't right,
Black leather moonlight,
I give in.
Loving you isn't right,
It's original sin.

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Loving you isn't right,
Black leather moonlight,
I give in.
Loving you isn't right,
It's original sin.

 

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Try hard to remember the beach

Blue water from the sea, hands all over me

Tattoos, they were glistening

It's been so long since someone made me different 


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Try hard to remember the beach

Blue water from the sea, hands all over me

Tattoos, they were glistening

It's been so long since someone made me different 

 

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Flowers in my hair, and your breath smelled like whiskey
Promise anywhere that I go, take you with me
Dancing on your feet, like a child, to the radio
Hello, hello, where did you go?


♡  standing stoic blue and denim, eyes not blue but clear like heaven 

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Flowers in my hair, and your breath smelled like whiskey
Promise anywhere that I go, take you with me
Dancing on your feet, like a child, to the radio
Hello, hello, where did you go?

 

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My father never stepped in when his wife would rage at me

so I ended up awkward but sweet

Later then hospitals, stand still on my feet

Comfortably numb, but with lithium came poetry


"ser bella me dio privilegios, pero ser astuta me dio poder"  :makeup:

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My father never stepped in when his wife would rage at me

so I ended up awkward but sweet

Later then hospitals, stand still on my feet

Comfortably numb, but with lithium came poetry

 

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I felt this way before

I've known the depths of utter desperation

My boyfriend says I'm like an old movie star

with loneliness as my occupation 


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My father never stepped in when his wife would rage at me

so I ended up awkward but sweet

Later then hospitals, stand still on my feet

Comfortably numb, but with lithium came poetry

 

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The sway of the hips and arms

Will cradle you from afar

They swing till you're tired

And send you to mars

Night time is almost ours

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The sway of the hips and arms

Will cradle you from afar

They swing till you're tired

And send you to mars

Night time is almost ours

 

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Meet me in the morning, wrap your arms around me

Tell me that it's over now that you have found me

Walk me to the river, see the willow bowing

Carry me into the water, now we're drowning


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Meet me in the morning, wrap your arms around me

Tell me that it's over now that you have found me

Walk me to the river, see the willow bowing

Carry me into the water, now we're drowning

 

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You're Superman and I'm not,
it's on your terms, we can waste all my time
Because I want you, I wanna go with you,
Don't leave me here, I wanna go with you

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Meet me in the morning, wrap your arms around me

Tell me that it's over now that you have found me

Walk me to the river, see the willow bowing

Carry me into the water, now we're drowning

 

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The cameras had flashes, they caused the car crashes
But I'm not a star
If you love me, you'll love me
'Cause I'm wild, wild at heart

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Meet me in the morning, wrap your arms around me

Tell me that it's over now that you have found me

Walk me to the river, see the willow bowing

Carry me into the water, now we're drowning

 

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And then you buy me roses and it’s fine
I forgive you almost all the time
As long as you remember that you’re mine
I’ll let you off easy, it’s alright

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And then you buy me roses and it’s fine
I forgive you almost all the time
As long as you remember that you’re mine
I’ll let you off easy, it’s alright

 

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you gotta be smart and im a little smarty


Truly ethereal, and it’s a huge pain in the ass

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And then you buy me roses and it’s fine
I forgive you almost all the time
As long as you remember that you’re mine
I’ll let you off easy, it’s alright

 

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You've got it
And I want it
Late summer nights in July, flaunt it
You know that you can always come home
To the one who gave you your name
'Cause I see a light in your eyes
It's so bright, and
The skies, they open wide for you
So come to me, my baby

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And then you buy me roses and it’s fine
I forgive you almost all the time
As long as you remember that you’re mine
I’ll let you off easy, it’s alright

 

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You always buy me roses like a creep

Asking for forgiveness, unsexy

What happened to the man you used to be?

If you still want my love, then work for me


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You always buy me roses like a creep

Asking for forgiveness, unsexy

What happened to the man you used to be?

If you still want my love, then work for me

 

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Maybe I’d get less stressed, if I was tested less like 
All of these debutantes 
Smiling for miles in pink dresses and high heels 
On white yachts

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