godsmonster 14,221 Posted September 26 Spoiler I'm gonna get dragged but idc. People only hate on her poetry because its become trendy to hate on Marina in the past five years. If these poems were Lana's yall would eat it up and call it art 12 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
helloheaven 535 Posted September 26 As someone who occasionally writes a poem/is an english major and reads a lot of books, I think Lana has a much better handle on intentional word usage in the poems i’ve read so far. Poetry means something, it doesn’t just mean flowery language and a lack of punctuation. In a poem, every word serves a purpose, and has the potential to change the whole flavor of a poem, like how much baking powder you add in baking. I think aspartame reads more like prose because of its lack of commitment to the form. I think Lana suffers from this in her poetry, too (why the hell would you add emojis into your poems unless they mean literally anything), but her theming is more succinct and her word choice is more intentional as a whole in poems like sportcruiser and tessa depietro, which demonstrate a closer level of an artist aspiring to discover her place in the world on a more philosophical level and one thats more interesting in terms of rhythm, diction, and form. But thats just my opinion 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Furor Poeticus 16,352 Posted September 26 Maybe it’s the language barrier, or maybe I’m not sensitive to free verse poetry, but Marina’s read more like short stories to me, not necessarily bad, though 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
79lipstick 498 Posted September 26 Well one thing is certain her poetry wont bring in any new fans.. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lana Del Dufrene 10,754 Posted September 26 2 hours ago, godsmonster said: Hide contents I'm gonna get dragged but idc. People only hate on her poetry because its become trendy to hate on Marina in the past five years. If these poems were Lana's yall would eat it up and call it art Clock It Sis 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DinahLee 6,206 Posted September 26 2 hours ago, godsmonster said: Reveal hidden contents I'm gonna get dragged but idc. People only hate on her poetry because its become trendy to hate on Marina in the past five years. If these poems were Lana's yall would eat it up and call it art You can write this out of spoiler, in big letters and bold my sis. Just tea. I think it's just so...mean that people not only decided to drop her the moment L+F didn't sound bright, but also just shit on her nonstop. No one's telling you to read her poetry, if you don't like her anymore then just unfollow and move along. As for the poetry itself, "Aspartame" is pretty shocking (complimentary). I can understand if you find it, poetry-wise, weak, but it's still a fucking revelation in a way her music wasn't able to convey before. Also blunt. As a fan, I find it fascinating to read that and then link up with the lyrics and stories that she shared for the past ~15 years. The way you can read Hollywood in another light, you understand a lot of her "America Obsession" and so on. I haven't been up with everything posted, but I also remember how that "Sparkling Clam" can be connected to Solitaire; it's a deep dive on her mind and life. Maybe the problem was labelling it as poetry and the expectations that comes with it. 6 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AllForYou 1,705 Posted September 26 13 minutes ago, DinahLee said: Maybe the problem was labelling it as poetry and the expectations that comes with it. 100% agree with everything you said. I said a few pages back I think she should have maybe marketed this as a memoir and ditched some of the rupi kaur line breaks (which makes it harder to read imo), but I think 'poetry book' is the current marketing buzzword at the moment. it's obvious she has a lot that she wants to get off her chest and feels like she can't sing those things, in pain eraser she said: line breaks omitted. the things i need to write about are the things i'm scared to write about, lest they blow up my life and everything i tried so hard to save / mend / bury / heal. if she sings about some of these things they're going to get so much more attention than if she just puts them in a poetry book and she'll have to sing them on tour for weeks. I think with over decade of releases she can just release her one little poetry book, new music is coming in 2025, and she'd already said she was taking a break because of her chronic fatigue so I don't think this poetry book has delayed the album at all. 4 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
79lipstick 498 Posted September 26 Lol you can replace Lana w any other artist, stans are gonna eat up anything their fav puts out regardless of the quality of the work. Thats how it is. And this thread shows it 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DinahLee 6,206 Posted September 26 10 minutes ago, 79lipstick said: Lol you can replace Lana w any other artist, stans are gonna eat up anything their fav puts out regardless of the quality of the work. Thats how it is. And this thread shows it It's not necessarily about fans eating things up, but the way things unfold. At worst, people were indifferent toward Violet Bent Backwards and mind you, that was during the peak of "mesh mask-gate post-Question For The Culture." Many people were enthusiastic and supportive, while Marina's ""fans"" just keep complaining and looking down on her. She's not the first or the last alt/flop girl to release a poetry book (off the top of my head, I can remember Banks & Halsey also dropping books within the last five years, to some great reviews!), but you don't see people clogging their threads and complaining. And I really hope no one will try to come with "but the music was good!!!" as a clapback. 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tana Mongeau 4,989 Posted September 26 3 hours ago, godsmonster said: Hide contents I'm gonna get dragged but idc. People only hate on her poetry because its become trendy to hate on Marina in the past five years. If these poems were Lana's yall would eat it up and call it art clocked all the flops in this thread 1 Quote what if the cockroaches have psychedelic pussy? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vrtvie 2,264 Posted September 26 4 hours ago, 79lipstick said: Well one thing is certain her poetry wont bring in any new fans.. Has Lana's brought her any? Anyways I think that certain poems of hers were nice, this one not so much, but the audio version seems interesting and this recycle of tumblr vibes feels familiar and it's something we the diamonds been lacking lately right? 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
79lipstick 498 Posted September 26 On 9/26/2024 at 11:11 PM, vrtvie said: Has Lana's brought her any? Anyways I think that certain poems of hers were nice, this one not so much, but the audio version seems interesting and this recycle of tumblr vibes feels familiar and it's something we the diamonds been lacking lately right? No, it didn't. On 9/26/2024 at 7:42 PM, DinahLee said: It's not necessarily about fans eating things up, but the way things unfold. At worst, people were indifferent toward Violet Bent Backwards and mind you, that was during the peak of "mesh mask-gate post-Question For The Culture." Many people were enthusiastic and supportive, while Marina's ""fans"" just keep complaining and looking down on her. She's not the first or the last alt/flop girl to release a poetry book (off the top of my head, I can remember Banks & Halsey also dropping books within the last five years, to some great reviews!), but you don't see people clogging their threads and complaining. And I really hope no one will try to come with "but the music was good!!!" as a clapback. i do agree with this regardless 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AllForYou 1,705 Posted September 27 she’s posted a partial recording list and teased the title ‘P.O.P’ which someone has speculated in the comments might be an abbreviation of ‘position of power’ as you can see ‘-f power’ on the recording list https://www.instagram.com/p/DAZpkpRSRAa/?img_index=3 4 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charlottexseax 7,943 Posted September 27 16 hours ago, godsmonster said: Reveal hidden contents I'm gonna get dragged but idc. People only hate on her poetry because its become trendy to hate on Marina in the past five years. If these poems were Lana's yall would eat it up and call it art I am not a fan of violet bent backwards but obviously there will be a different in reception form Marina to Lana considering Lana is a much better artist?? Like do you think Marina and Lana are on the same level artistically speaking? 💀💀 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Embach 42,445 Posted September 27 2 hours ago, AllForYou said: she’s posted a partial recording list and teased the title ‘P.O.P’ which someone has speculated in the comments might be an abbreviation of ‘position of power’ as you can see ‘-f power’ on the recording list https://www.instagram.com/p/DAZpkpRSRAa/?img_index=3 Audiobook recording list or new album's? I read Stallion, Megan Stallion collab? 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charlottexseax 7,943 Posted September 29 bitch she drank mother lake DRYY. call her incestuose the way she's sister, mother and COUSIN all at once! no one was seeing her in 2010 she was really at the top of the game 5 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JDaniel 999 Posted September 29 On 27/09/2024 at 09:49, Charlottexseax said: I'm not a fan of Violet Bent Backwards but there will obviously be a difference in Marina's reception to Lana given that Lana is a much better artist? Do you think Marina and Lana are on the same level artistically speaking?💀 💀 best not best i don't know, no art is not a competition anyway For me Lana is always on edge; I think I feel all these emotions Marina is great but doesn't move me deeply but that doesn't matter because only Lana as an artist has this power over me 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bloody Valentine 844 Posted September 29 Tbh I don't really care for this poetry book at all, but I find it interesting as a stan. I feel like I'm just getting more information about her as a person and also more info on certain lyrics/songs. Is the poetry book good or is she good as a writer? Probably not lol, but it doesn't really matter. Also comparing her to other artists is just... Just enjoy it if you want to, if you don't then fuck off and move on. Spoiler sometimes I think Marina only has haters as fans... 1 Quote 🍒 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AllForYou 1,705 Posted September 29 14 minutes ago, Bloody Valentine said: Tbh I don't really care for this poetry book at all, but I find it interesting as a stan. I feel like I'm just getting more information about her as a person and also more info on certain lyrics/songs. Is the poetry book good or is she good as a writer? Probably not lol, but it doesn't really matter. exactly! speaking of more information she did a podcast on her chronic fatigue, (nothing on new music, so don't watch it expecting that), it's so sad to hear how happy she was during the froot era then all these things started going wrong for her (starts around 7m in) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hqze7e3G_Wc 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
williamprb 1,975 Posted September 29 We came to an agreement in good health 6 Quote young, wild, free but most of all fucking crazy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites