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i love to write in my free time and i have no idea if this would be the right place to post this (mods feel free to move it if you want!) but i thought it would be fun if i could dump some of my writings here and get feedback from fellow poetry/songwriting enthusiasts! also feel free to post your own writing here!!!


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VHS PRINCESS

 

this place is a ghost town

without you here

tv on in the background

drowning out the fear

going to video palace

back when that was a thing

 

this guy has his hazard lights on and 

i wonder if he knows that i’m drunk

every word flowing out of my mouth and

spoken with his silver tongue

 

but lately ive been getting back on my meds

rearranging my bedroom, reconnecting with my old friends

telling stories to them they can’t believe

about that time that i was too high to breathe

leave me in peace, i can’t get you out of my head

lived there so long, its time you start paying rent

cause it was my choice to give my body up

to a man like you cause i didn’t give a fuck

and you don’t either stop acting like you do

cause you only want me if there’s sex in it for you

 

take my clothes off like its christmas

i know im top of your wishlist

then when i look into the mirror

after we fuck in your truck i can see clear

i just want attention from someone

and all you ever wanted was to

 

coming up next on the tv

everything everyone says about me

that i look like im from the movies

that i make love like its my destiny

but i want back

what i can’t have

my innocence

playing freeze tag

with my guard down

touch my heart now

your ignorance

always wins somehow

 

did you ever think i was any

thing other than just your baby

got me crying feel like i can’t speak 

instill the fear and desert me

 

fuck me on the floor of our hometown hotel

unlike snow white looking through a wishing well

i have but one song and it’s not yours to tell

cause it’s my story and it’s mine to

 

selling myself to jesus at offering

looking back i fear i was haunting

the wrong house the wrong school the wrong street

hang me on the cross like an art piece


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1 hour ago, DCooper said:

@love deluxe I really like it! I went to reply to your question earlier but it was gone haha. I think it's very evocative and I see the Lana inspiration :party::gclap:

thank you smmm :wub: i was inspired after listening to a&w for the first time and was like- i have to jot what i’m feeling down right now haha


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Cutest Kids in the Coffee Shop

 

how long have you been standing

in the back silently staring

at me

 

like an art piece tattooed on me

when our eyes meet

hear my heartbeat

 

crying out for your hands

to just move a little closer

and we

 

can’t deny the space between us

let’s just pretend

that it’s easy

 

cause i don’t know if what you’re saying

is what i want to hear

don’t know if the game youre playing

is worth the tears

 

but when you say that we’re the cutest

kids in the coffee shop

i don’t care if it’s wrong and ill never stop

been this way since i was young

staying after class for an older someone

 

maybe it’s just living in a small town got me

finding whoevers around so im looking

for trouble in places so strange and id rather be

caught dead than caught here with you all up on me


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you know you won me over

run your hands over me

like i was made of water

like i ain’t got air to breathe

 

im not the best at much but

you tell me otherwise

if only you knew

why i

hesitate to

open up my mind

 

don’t you think twice when i get shy

when you try to talk to me?

look me in the eye and tell me that you know who i can be?

you saw me when i only saw what other people see

just me, but baby

 

you saw me for me

 

holding your stare

on lockdown like you swear

i can feel you there

you’re so debonair

but if i declare

my thoughts will you still care, babe?

 

i don’t mind

just look into my eyes

and if you tell me lies

i swear that i’ll be fine

 

you know you got me dancing

around in all my dreams

do i just solve the problem

or give into me?

 

waiting for your headlights 

to pass around my way

in the darkest

night i

know that

you still

recognize my face

 

don’t you see my shining silhouette

standing on second street?

pondering if this place is just where im meant to be?

i think that i love you but ill never let you see

cause, baby

you and me

 

we’re not meant to be

 

holding my stare

on lockdown like i swear

i still feel you there

you’re so debonair

but if i declare

my thoughts would you still care, babe?

i can hear the bells

like magic got me under your spell

feeling unwell

baby cant you tell

know full well

that i would go to hell

for you

 

i don’t mind

just look into my eyes

and if you tell me lies

i swear that i’ll be fine

i dont wanna be friends

want you to be obsessed

can’t deal with second best

im not like all the rest,

 

cause

you know you won me over

run your hands over me

like i was made of water

like i ain’t got air to breathe


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