my final about lana del rey for english.

[jamesss]

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1MCsDM5C_gzKHipJtQcYgsCa0ccIIx68L/view?usp=drivesdk 

 

 

[vacillator]

My only critique is the formatting. MLA format has the teacher name, class, date etc block removed by the second page and   there should be a page indicator going "NAME 1" so on so forth

[jamesss]

16 minutes ago, weinendersoldat said:

My only critique is the formatting. MLA format has the teacher name, class, date etc block removed by the second page and   there should be a page indicator going "NAME 1" so on so forth

i mean i got a 98/100 and mr. dickey wouldn’t tell me why… so maybe that’s because of it. 

[vacillator]

48 minutes ago, jamesss said:

i mean i got a 98/100 and mr. dickey wouldn’t tell me why… so maybe that’s because of it. 

Yeah, usually you'll be docked for formatting errors. I'll upload a PDF of the template I used from google docs but with the edits I made.

 

Here's the template I modified for my use throughout my school years. If need be, I can email you the document so you can save it and use it for future essays.

[Ultra Violet]

Cool read it could be a published article for all i know. Thanks for sharing! 

I have to agree with what youve written, even tho i might always think "well I never took it that way". But i think thats because i wasnt going to fully commit to any aesthetic, and i could seperate my perspective of her music from what others were trying to make it. Meanwhile, i totally acknowledge that others didnt, and they will always associate her with that tumblr era, toxicity, etc.

I basically wish people wouldnt blame Lana for starting it, because she didnt promote this community around, but tbh, im still not sure if she is 100% not to blame? You know? If shes to blame, then there are other artists to blame too, like Marina, for example, who literally had e.d. glamorised lyrics  not sure if thats a box i wanna open

[Acid]

I'm not reading all of that but it's a 100% guaranteed