Specific Lana Lyrics That You'd Like To Modify?

[Divineness]

overall i don't think there's many lyrics that i would change on lana's discography but

 

- Damn You: instead of "I pray your life is sweet, you fucker" i used to think that it's "I pray your life is sweet, motherfucker" instead  "you fucker" just feels out of place tbh

 

- Chemtrails Over The Country Club: "I'm just wiliiiiiid" i would change it to "I'm just wild at heart". perfect reference to Wild At Heart

 

- White Feather: just like Lindsay said, "I know it's strange to see me cooking for my lover" flows better than "...husband"

[pinupgirl]

In Norman Fucking Rockwell: "Your poetry's bad and you blame the news" should've been "Your poetry's bad and you blame your muse"

[Lilacs In My Mind]

3 hours ago, pinupgirl said:

In Norman Fucking Rockwell: "Your poetry's bad and you blame the news" should've been "Your poetry's bad and you blame your muse"

I love the original because it ties in with the cultural commentary on the album

[HawaiianTea]

In Serial Killer when lana says “You know I love the thrill of the rush” In my head “thrill for the hunt” made more sense 

[Unfixable]

1 hour ago, HawaiianTea said:

In Serial Killer when lana says “You know I love the thrill of the rush” In my head “thrill for the hunt” made more sense 

 

Random but in the last chorus she should've changed it to "you know I love the thrill of your touch" idk i just like the flow of that

[Elle]

59 minutes ago, Unfixable said:

 

Random but in the last chorus she should've changed it to "you know I love the thrill of your touch" idk i just like the flow of that

She actually would sing it live in a similar way sometimes, "I do it for the thrill of your touch" x

 

[Unfixable]

Just now, Elle said:

She actually would sing it live in a similar way sometimes, "I do it for the thrill of your touch" x

 x

YES I KNEW I HEARD IT SOMEWHERE AND WASN'T CRAZY I EXPECTED IT EVERY TIME I LISTENED TO THE SONG THEN IT NEVER CAME SO I CHECKED THE LYRICS AND IT WASN'T THERE SO I ASSUMED I MADE IT UP 

[Embach]

I really hope that in Go Go Dancer it is "Tupac's sweetheart" and not "jukebox sweetheart" or not "two buck sweetheart". I still don't know which one is right but when I first heard that part I instantly thought of Tupac.

[Spyda]

2 minutes ago, Embach said:

I really hope that in Go Go Dancer it is "Tupac's sweetheart" and not "jukebox sweetheart" or not "two buck sweetheart". I still don't know which one is right but when I first heard that part I instantly thought of Tupac.

 

Omg I also heard Tupac when I first listened to it! Lol for such a long time I thought the lyrics were:

 

I'm your go-go dancer, midnight answer
Tupac's sweetheart, queen of the night
Fake ass baby, if you pay me

[Lilacs In My Mind]

3 hours ago, Embach said:

I really hope that in Go Go Dancer it is "Tupac's sweetheart" and not "jukebox sweetheart" or not "two buck sweetheart". I still don't know which one is right but when I first heard that part I instantly thought of Tupac.

It's definitely "jukebox sweetheart"..."Tupac's sweetheart" would be...a strange lyric to say the least 

[plastiscguy]

That Textbook line

[The Stargirl Pinky]

“He’s crazy y cubano como yo la la” God that’s so lazy on her part tbh say “my love” or something else literally anything else but la la 

[Embach]

3 minutes ago, The Stargirl Pinky said:

“He’s crazy y cubano como yo la la” God that’s so lazy on her part tbh say “my love” or something else literally anything else but la la 

Is it not "my love" actually? :o

[Unfixable]

"Don't treat me tough, treat me really niceys" I HATE!!

Couldn't she have done "...treat me really nicely" or literally anything else?

[dark blue]

All the swearing in lyrics. I just think swearing in songs is so overrated and screams of "I want to be young and relevant". Don't crucify me! Bye~

[plastiscguy]

27 minutes ago, dark blue said:

All the swearing in lyrics. I just think swearing in songs is so overrated and screams of "I want to be young and relevant". Don't crucify me! Bye~

I agree but Cherry's need to stay tho

[lili]

I feel like I'm going to get crucified for this but I hate "the rain was fire but we were wooden". It screams middle schooler who just started writing poetry and thinks that sounds so different. 

[Embach]

5 minutes ago, lili said:

I feel like I'm going to get crucified for this but I hate "the rain was fire but we were wooden". It screams middle schooler who just started writing poetry and thinks that sounds so different. 

I actually really like this line and I had always thought it was a clever one but I alwaysss picture Minecraft in my head when this line comes. Like when the wooden blocks are on fire and it's also raining lol.

[details]

i hate that it's actually "beautiful losers" in venice bitch to me it will always be "la la la la la la beautiful… beautiful… beautiful" even if it's arguably a worse lyric lol