Poem Based on Off To The Races

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hey i made a poem based on off to the races, let me know what you guys think:)

 

he sees through me

right through my tar black soul

as if i’m made of glass

mirroring his sweet blood-red jam soul

 

he admires me

while i’m dancing 'round Château Marmont

watching my glimmering smile

as he took a sip on his Bacardi

 

he loves me

every inch of my body

no matter who I was

with my Vegas past

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