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revadece liked a post in a topic by CarmensProblem in Poem Based on Off To The Races
hey i made a poem based on off to the races, let me know what you guys think:)
he sees through me
right through my tar black soul
as if i’m made of glass
mirroring his sweet blood-red jam soul
he admires me
while i’m dancing 'round Château Marmont
watching my glimmering smile
as he took a sip on his Bacardi
he loves me
every inch of my body
no matter who I was
with my Vegas past
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13beachess liked a post in a topic by CarmensProblem in Poem Based on Off To The Races
hey i made a poem based on off to the races, let me know what you guys think:)
he sees through me
right through my tar black soul
as if i’m made of glass
mirroring his sweet blood-red jam soul
he admires me
while i’m dancing 'round Château Marmont
watching my glimmering smile
as he took a sip on his Bacardi
he loves me
every inch of my body
no matter who I was
with my Vegas past