Serene Queen 4,786 Posted October 12, 2018 So, I wrote a Lizzy inspired song and I tried to make it as Lizzy as possible. I’d love some suggestions for things I could add references too or make better Neon Miami Lights sparkle at night My gangta baby He’s doin it right Night in Las Vegas Only it’s not The Strip’s still shinin It never goes dark Casino Oasis I have no money What the hell is this It’s no longer funny Summer in LA Hollywood, Vine I live on skid row And that’s just fine That’s just fine with me Boy I been singin In cheap motels If I see another Motel 6 It’ll send me to hell Take me to the trailer park We can kiss in the dark Cotton candy ice cream My love, you’re so mean Let’s go to Coney Coney Island queen More cotton candy It’s my boardwalk dream Those bright neon signs Put a sparkle in my eyes I love you daddy Lean over, kiss me I’m your angel faced baby With my blonde hair Not a care in the world when I’m with you boy 3 Quote Hell, I Suppose if You Stick Around Long Enough, They Have to Say Something Nice About You Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Barry 5,952 Posted October 12, 2018 So, I wrote a Lizzy inspired song and I tried to make it as Lizzy as possible. I’d love some suggestions for things I could add references too or make better Neon Miami Lights sparkle at night My gangta baby He’s doin it right He’s doin it right Night in Las Vegas Only it’s not The Strip is still shinin If never goes dark Casino Oasis I have no money What the hell is this It’s no longer funny Summer in LA Hollywood, Vine I live on skid row And that’s just fine And that’s just fine with me Boy I been singin In cheap motels If I see another Motel 6 It’ll send me to hell Take me to the trailer park We can kiss in the dark Cotton candy ice cream My love, you’re so mean Let’s go to Coney Coney Island queen More cotton candy It’s my boardwalk dream Those bright neon signs Put a sparkle in my eyes I love you daddy Lean over, kiss me I’m your angel faced baby With my blonde hair They all kind of work nicely if each one was a short poem but its hard to think of how it flows as one song. I liked it 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Serene Queen 4,786 Posted October 12, 2018 Another one Oh daddy please drive me all around the USA The USA We’ll ride in your vintage Chevrolet Vintage Chevrolet You can get me a soda pop Keep drivin and we’ll never stop Flying the American flag Oh you make me so glad Chorus: Glad to be with you Glad to be near you Daddy I hear you Kiss me now We can pull over Stay in a motel Gas station queen And diner baby We’ll make it like f-f-f-forty nine Baby, you’re mine We’ll buy a trailer Befriend all the neighbors We’ll park your Chevy right outside I’ll be so happy I’ll be so glad, yeah Chorus Indian Reser- Re-eservation Sway with the palm trees Buy cotton candy Oh, how I love thee I’m you’re diner baby And I’m glad to be Chorus We’ll watch TV All I need is you near me To be happy 1 Quote Hell, I Suppose if You Stick Around Long Enough, They Have to Say Something Nice About You Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
