Artworks : Concept LDR Albums by TRIANGLES19

[triangles19 2,499]

Hello, I create one thread for my Lana's bootleg, I'll keep it updated. I'd like to read your feedback <3

 

 

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* Notes :  Making Out : Version 1 / Hollywoods Dead : Demo / Dum Dum : Version 3 / Afraid : Final Mix

[maxthehitman 1,730]

Very cool !        I like it. Congratulations!

Thanks for sharing your art 

 

 

Here is my feedback ...

The overall look to the packaging is very eye-catching and I also like the font you used. The photo you chose is also very cool.

 

The only thing that I can suggest in changing is in the coloring of the letters. Leave them as they look, but give those red-tones a slightly brighter hue.

The darker areas of the letters tend to make them dissappear a litle bit into the black background. Try giving those dark reds a 5-to-10% more pigment.

Not too much, but enough to give them a little pop and stand out more.