Dark Angel Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 also, i'll be stylist for when we all make our red carpet appearances! 8 Quote
lili Posted October 29, 2022 Author Posted October 29, 2022 On 10/29/2022 at 9:06 PM, Surf Noir said: also, i'll be stylist for when we all make our red carpet appearances! Expand Oooo we’re in good hands I mean they’re basically handing out Grammies like gum these days, they might as well just give us the Song of the Year 2 Quote
Glitter Boy Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 help the concept instrumental sounds so bad i wanna cry this is gonna be a mess omgomgomgomg i hate it it originally had potential but now it just sucks and i might need to start from scratch i ruined it with some weird pop-like drums and a couple arps and now i can't unhear it sorry guys this is going to take longer or a different producer im crying 0 Quote "I'm wild, I'm free, no man can handle me"
Beautiful Loser Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 Don’t worry, scratch it if you really have to! 4 Quote
Dark Angel Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 On 10/29/2022 at 11:24 PM, Glitter Boy said: help the concept instrumental sounds so bad i wanna cry this is gonna be a mess omgomgomgomg i hate it it originally had potential but now it just sucks and i might need to start from scratch i ruined it with some weird pop-like drums and a couple arps and now i can't unhear it sorry guys this is going to take longer or a different producer im crying Expand you obviously don't have to, but i would share it anyway! maybe it's not as bad as you think lol are you able to remove the drums and harps? honestly that concept sounds cool 2 Quote
Glitter Boy Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 On 10/29/2022 at 11:27 PM, Surf Noir said: you obviously don't have to, but i would share it anyway! maybe it's not as bad as you think lol are you able to remove the drums and harps? honestly that concept sounds cool Expand i think i will post till first chorus, while i work on the second half of the song. the arpeggios make it sound, er, a little too much of synthpop for her usual style and it completely deviates from the original vibe, so lemme export and post real quick 3 Quote "I'm wild, I'm free, no man can handle me"
Dark Angel Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 On 10/29/2022 at 11:29 PM, Glitter Boy said: i think i will post till first chorus, while i work on the second half of the song. the arpeggios make it sound, er, a little too much of synthpop for her usual style and it completely deviates from the original vibe, so lemme export and post real quick Expand just think of it as an early demo, it wouldn't be unusual to start again from scratch based on that concept and rework it into something better! 3 Quote
KingsMotelPart2 Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 On 10/29/2022 at 11:24 PM, Glitter Boy said: help the concept instrumental sounds so bad i wanna cry this is gonna be a mess omgomgomgomg i hate it it originally had potential but now it just sucks and i might need to start from scratch i ruined it with some weird pop-like drums and a couple arps and now i can't unhear it sorry guys this is going to take longer or a different producer im crying Expand Don't worry, I understand perfectly, I once tried to do something on FL Studio and ended up with a broken head, but it can always be fixed, so cheer up, and I send you lots of love and good vibes!!!! 3 Quote
Glitter Boy Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 OKAY so here's the first concept demo for the instrumental. Tried to follow some of what's been said regarding the sound, but it still needs A LOT of work done with it. I will try and rework it asap. Rough af, not even mixed properly but you can get the vibe i guess? it's just the first half and will get bigger towards the second half. Any feedback is more than welcome! idea 1 instrumental On 10/29/2022 at 11:37 PM, KingsMotelPart2 said: Don't worry, I understand perfectly, I once tried to do something on FL Studio and ended up with a broken head, but it can always be fixed, so cheer up, and I send you lots of love and good vibes!!!! Expand thanks a lot babes! probably if i let it rest for a little and come back with renewed energies i can make it work. will give it a try tomorrow along with the comments y'all provide! <3 9 Quote "I'm wild, I'm free, no man can handle me"
KingsMotelPart2 Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 On 10/29/2022 at 11:37 PM, Glitter Boy said: OKAY so here's the first concept demo for the instrumental. Tried to follow some of what's been said regarding the sound, but it still needs A LOT of work done with it. I will try and rework it asap. Rough af, not even mixed properly but you can get the vibe i guess? it's just the first half and will get bigger towards the second half. Any feedback is more than welcome! idea 1 instrumental thanks a lot babes! probably if i let it rest for a little and come back with renewed energies i can make it work. will give it a try tomorrow along with the comments y'all provide! <3 Expand That's a great idea! I just listened to it, it sounds very atmospheric, the beginning reminds me a bit of I talk to Jesus!, I even tried it with a random melody I came up with, and it went very smoothly for a first idea 3 Quote
Dark Angel Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 On 10/29/2022 at 11:37 PM, Glitter Boy said: OKAY so here's the first concept demo for the instrumental. Tried to follow some of what's been said regarding the sound, but it still needs A LOT of work done with it. I will try and rework it asap. Rough af, not even mixed properly but you can get the vibe i guess? it's just the first half and will get bigger towards the second half. Any feedback is more than welcome! idea 1 instrumental thanks a lot babes! probably if i let it rest for a little and come back with renewed energies i can make it work. will give it a try tomorrow along with the comments y'all provide! <3 Expand wtf THIS IS SO GOOD i could definitely imagine something very cathartic/ultraviolence-esque for the lyrical content, thanks for sharing this with us! although, i think it would be better if it were a little slower, but that's just me lol! 4 Quote
KingsMotelPart2 Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 On 10/29/2022 at 11:50 PM, Surf Noir said: wtf THIS IS SO GOOD i could definitely imagine something very cathartic/ultraviolence-esque for the lyrical content, thanks for sharing this with us! although, i think it would be better if it were a little slower, but that's just me lol! Expand YESSS! Perhaps my suggestion would be to have the iconic western guitars, or some orchestral percussion a la Dan Heath 3 Quote
Dark Angel Posted October 29, 2022 Posted October 29, 2022 On 10/29/2022 at 11:53 PM, KingsMotelPart2 said: YESSS! Perhaps my suggestion would be to have the iconic western guitars, or some orchestral percussion a la Dan Heath Expand yes! some of the other instruments that came in during the middle of that little preview reminded me of guitars, that would be really cool and so reminiscent of her born to die/paradise era! 4 Quote
Um Chile Anyways So Posted October 30, 2022 Posted October 30, 2022 this first demo is giving 2012 unreleased vibes and im here for it 4 Quote
plastiscguy Posted October 30, 2022 Posted October 30, 2022 On 10/29/2022 at 11:37 PM, Glitter Boy said: OKAY so here's the first concept demo for the instrumental. Tried to follow some of what's been said regarding the sound, but it still needs A LOT of work done with it. I will try and rework it asap. Rough af, not even mixed properly but you can get the vibe i guess? it's just the first half and will get bigger towards the second half. Any feedback is more than welcome! idea 1 instrumental Expand THIS IS SO EFFING GOOD, WTF May I ask for the chords and BPM of the project, if you don't mind? 5 Quote My rose garden dreams set on fire by fiends...
plastiscguy Posted October 30, 2022 Posted October 30, 2022 By the way, should we create a group chat or a discord server so we can share the audio files easier? like, maybe have separate channels for each parts of the song, like one for songwriting brainstorm, one for the production, etc? I don't even remember if LB had an official server or not Anyways 4 Quote My rose garden dreams set on fire by fiends...
TRENCH Posted October 30, 2022 Posted October 30, 2022 On 10/29/2022 at 11:50 PM, Surf Noir said: wtf THIS IS SO GOOD i could definitely imagine something very cathartic/ultraviolence-esque for the lyrical content, thanks for sharing this with us! although, i think it would be better if it were a little slower, but that's just me lol! Expand omg yes im here for it 3 Quote
Wait For Life Posted October 30, 2022 Posted October 30, 2022 a discord server would be easy aiden#0911 3 Quote
Glitter Boy Posted October 30, 2022 Posted October 30, 2022 THANK Y'ALL I'M SO GLAD YOU'RE LIKING IT On 10/30/2022 at 12:09 AM, plastiscguy said: THIS IS SO EFFING GOOD, WTF May I ask for the chords and BPM of the project, if you don't mind? Expand UGH LEGEND it means a lot, thanks <3 yup, it's 94 BPM but it will probably be slower considering the very on point suggestion of @Surf Noir, which I also considered first. Reveal hidden contents don't k1ll me but I know nothing about chords, lmao. this is what i came up with - applies for piano, strings and that orchestral-esque synth. as for how to read it, i have absolutely no idea On 10/30/2022 at 12:15 AM, plastiscguy said: By the way, should we create a group chat or a discord server so we can share the audio files easier? like, maybe have separate channels for each parts of the song, like one for songwriting brainstorm, one for the production, etc? I don't even remember if LB had an official server or not Anyways Expand yeah, totally! I think that would make it easier to interact and stuff. however i don't really know how to create one 2 Quote "I'm wild, I'm free, no man can handle me"
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