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Honey I'm on fire, I feel it everywhere. Nothing scares me anymore.

 

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I hope that I come back one day

To tell you that I really changgggggedddd, bbaaaaabbbbyyy


You call me lavender, you call me sunshine.

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I hope that I come back one day
To tell you that I really changgggggedddd, bbaaaaabbbbyyy 

 

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For Amy and for Whitney, and all my birds of paradise

Who never got to fly at night, 'cause they were caught up in the dance


~~~My body is stuck in the ocean ugcs3%2Fv3%2Fproject_attachments%2FGC6xU My mind is lost in the universe*** 

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For Amy and for Whitney, and all my birds of paradise

Who never got to fly at night, 'cause they were caught up in the dance

Vs

All the lights in Miami begin to gleam


Hell, I Suppose if You Stick Around Long Enough, They Have to Say Something Nice About You

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For Amy and for Whitney, and all my birds of paradise
Who never got to fly at night, 'cause they were caught up in the dance

 

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I heard you like to skip ropes and break hearts :hooker:


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For Amy and for Whitney, and all my birds of paradise

Who never got to fly at night, 'cause they were caught up in the dance

Versus

I’m a dragon, you’re a whore, don’t even know what you’re good for


Hell, I Suppose if You Stick Around Long Enough, They Have to Say Something Nice About You

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For Amy and for Whitney, and all my birds of paradise
Who never got to fly at night, 'cause they were caught up in the dance

 

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Palm trees, in the light, I can see, late at night

Darling I'm waiting to greet you


You call me lavender, you call me sunshine.

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For Amy and for Whitney, and all my birds of paradise
Who never got to fly at night, 'cause they were caught up in the dance

 

vs

 

High up in the Hollywood Hills crushing violet pills
You've been trying to write a novel bout your cheap thrills


♡  standing stoic blue and denim, eyes not blue but clear like heaven 

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High up in the Hollywood Hills crushing violet pills

You've been trying to write a novel bout your cheap thrills

 

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Who am I to sympathize when on one gave a damn


Hell, I Suppose if You Stick Around Long Enough, They Have to Say Something Nice About You

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High up in the Hollywood Hills crushing violet pills
You've been trying to write a novel bout your cheap thrills

 

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My old man is a tough man

But he's got a soul as sweet as blood red jam

And he shows me, he knows me, every inch of my tar black soul


You call me lavender, you call me sunshine.

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(As much as I love Is This Happiness I have to pick OTTR so)

 

My old man is a tough man

But he's got a soul as sweet as blood red jam

And he shows me, he knows me, every inch of my tar black soul

 

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And so, from being created in his likeness, to being banished for wanting to be too much like him, we were cast out, and the garden of Eden transformed in to the garden of Evil
Los Angeles, The city of Angels, A land of Gods and Monsters, The in-between realm where only the choices made from your free will, will decide your souls final fate
Some poets called it the entrance to the Underworld, but on some summer nights, it could feel like Paradise, Paradise Lost


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My old man is a tough man

But he's got a soul as sweet as blood red jam

And he shows me, he knows me, every inch of my tar black soul

 

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This is my commitment, my modern manifesto

I’m doin it for all of us

Who never got the chance


Hell, I Suppose if You Stick Around Long Enough, They Have to Say Something Nice About You

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My old man is a tough man
But he's got a soul as sweet as blood red jam
And he shows me, he knows me, every inch of my tar black soul

 

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There are violets in your eyes. There are guns that blaze around you. 

There are roses in between my thighs. Fire that surrounds you. 

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My old man is a tough man

But he's got a soul as sweet as blood red jam

And he shows me, he knows me, every inch of my tar black soul

 

vs.

 

Wake up each night at the same time

Roll up the blind and look outside

And in the orange light, the fog is rising


Hell, I Suppose if You Stick Around Long Enough, They Have to Say Something Nice About You

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My old man is a tough man
But he's got a soul as sweet as blood red jam
And he shows me, he knows me, every inch of my tar black soul

 

vs.

 

Put me onto your black motorcycle

Fifties baby doll dress for my 'I do"
It only takes two hours to Nevada


You call me lavender, you call me sunshine.

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Put me onto your black motorcycle

Fifties baby doll dress for my 'I do"

It only takes two hours to Nevada

 

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I went out shopping and

Planned to go to all them vintage stores

Then I got tired and ended up in some lame department store

And that's okay cause I found a really cool belt


Hell, I Suppose if You Stick Around Long Enough, They Have to Say Something Nice About You

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Put me onto your black motorcycle
Fifties baby doll dress for my 'I do"
It only takes two hours to Nevada

 

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Idol of roses, iconic soul. I know your name.
Lead me to war with your brilliant direction


♡  standing stoic blue and denim, eyes not blue but clear like heaven 

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Idol of roses iconic soul, I know you're name.

Lead me to war with your brilliant direction.

 

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You talk lots about God. Freedom comes from the car, but, that's not what this bitch wants. Not what I want at all.

lol, It's call

 

''You talk lots about God. Freedom comes from the call, but, that's not what this bitch wants. Not what I want at all.''

 

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''I keep my lips red to seem like cherries in the spring, darling you can't let everything seem so dark blue.''


~~~My body is stuck in the ocean ugcs3%2Fv3%2Fproject_attachments%2FGC6xU My mind is lost in the universe*** 

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