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  1. 1. Which Song From BTD should i sing second?

    • Born To Die
      0
    • Blue Jeans
      0
    • Video Games
      0
    • Diet Mtn. Dew
      0
    • Radio
      1
    • Dark Paradise
      0
    • National Anthem
      0
    • Carmen
      0
    • Million Dollar Man
      2
    • Summertime Sadness
      1
    • TIWMUG
      4
    • Without You
      1
    • Lucky Ones
      3
    • Ride
      1
    • American
      0
    • Body Electric
      0
    • Blue Velvet
      0
    • Yayo
      1
    • Gods & Monsters (maybe, Idk)
      0
    • Burning Desire
      0


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It's really good, but you really should've used a better instrumental imo. this one lacks depth. also i don't know if it's intentional but at some points you are off tempo and that makes it sounds weird  :ohno: oh and also, I know it's a cover, but the the way you changed the melody in the verses makes it sound like a completely different song - remember, you're doing a cover of lana, not christina aguilera! also at some points you sound kinda out of breath; maybe take another look at your singing techniques? lastly I think the vocal effects you added might be a little bit too much.

 

sorry for all the criticism :eek: but I know you can do better and I really want to hear it!

A++ for effort though  :party:

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It's really good, but you really should've used a better instrumental imo. this one lacks depth. also i don't know if it's intentional but at some points you are off tempo and that makes it sounds weird  :ohno: oh and also, I know it's a cover, but the the way you changed the melody in the verses makes it sound like a completely different song - remember, you're doing a cover of lana, not christina aguilera! also at some points you sound kinda out of breath; maybe take another look at your singing techniques? lastly I think the vocal effects you added might be a little bit too much.

 

sorry for all the criticism :eek: but I know you can do better and I really want to hear it!

 

A++ for effort though  :party:

 

This tbh...I think a honest/helpful critique should always be valued.

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it sounds that u were drunker than lana in her gig.  :smokes2:

hahahahaaahahah, omg 

 

This tbh...I think a honest/helpful critique should always be valued.

 

It's really good, but you really should've used a better instrumental imo. this one lacks depth. also i don't know if it's intentional but at some points you are off tempo and that makes it sounds weird  :ohno: oh and also, I know it's a cover, but the the way you changed the melody in the verses makes it sound like a completely different song - remember, you're doing a cover of lana, not christina aguilera! also at some points you sound kinda out of breath; maybe take another look at your singing techniques? lastly I think the vocal effects you added might be a little bit too much.

 

sorry for all the criticism :eek: but I know you can do better and I really want to hear it!

 

A++ for effort though  :party:

thank you for being honest!


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I don't know, I kinda like it  :whatever:  Though, some parts were kinda iffy, but you had some good notes.  :agree2:


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I don't know, I kinda like it  :whatever:  Though, some parts were kinda iffy, but you had some good notes.  :agree2:

thank you!!, i've been working on my voice alot and since I don't use autotune or anything like that its just my natural voice so sometimes it can be iffy, thank you for being honest and supportive!


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