PARADIXO 32,925 Posted January 23, 2018 I hope I find a wayTo maintainThis happinessWhich I find so rareI think you areOne reason to smileThroughout the nightI won't look back'Cause you make me feelLike I deserve somethingSomething smallSomething at lastI wish I could sleep with youEvery single night'Cause having you rest over meCouldn't make me happierWe talk 'bout a future dogI hope all of our dreams come trueWe both want a beautiful houseI think it's too muchIt's too much, the love I have for youThe things I want to happen to usAnd I couldn't standI couldn't bareSeeing those dreams get lostAnd I will fight until I'm tiredFor you to feel like a prince'Cause you got royal bloodI say'Cause you got royal bloodI say 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
UltraHeroin 8,803 Posted April 20, 2018 Hey Came here from your status update. I had a quick listen to all of the songs and I just want to let you know your record is pretty good. I liked every single track, especially from 4 to 10. It sets such a great mood. Also, the lyrics are really good too. I really like the sound of the album, it's just like a psychedelic dream, like I'm hovering over the sea and the trees on a sunny and windy day. Sometimes I felt It was kinda slow though, but still beautiful, nonetheless. How I wish I could do something like this. Great Record. 0 Quote ~~~My body is stuck in the ocean My mind is lost in the universe*** Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Creyk 11,677 Posted April 20, 2018 You asked for people to listen to your songs so I actually listened to the whole thing and wrote down my honest thoughts about each one. black - too languid, it's just really slow speaking over this ambient noise promises - the part at 1:33 is very pretty, your voice is sounds good in this. I like the music box sounds at 2:20. Feels like it drags on after 3:30 and loses it's energy. What We Had Has Come and Gone - The intro is pretty, I like the instrumental. Best one yet. Mother - You need to improve your vocal delivery, I think this song would sound so much better if you didn't sing in this mumbling kind of way although that might be your style/what you are into IDK Inside You - the piano in the background is really nice Your Night - I like the distant vocals around the minute mark, there it's finally proper vocals not this "mumbling/speaking with my hand in front of my mouth" kind of singing that seems to be on most tracks. This has the best vocal production imo in the second half it sounds great. Fall - I like the part between 50-1:10 the catchiest thing I heard on this album. This "moving side by side" sound that is the part of the instrumental becomes annoying by the time the song gets to the 2:40 mark I wish it would stop at that point. Like it's nice but gets too much. The Waves - "The sand is calling my soulThe waves dance to this songThe wind blows coldI couldn't care lessThese strings are meeting the waterThey're getting alongMuch better than I do with people" I think these are the best lyrics on the album. You are right the instrumental is similar to 13 beaches a bit at some points. At Last - I like the held note at 2:55 and the part at 4:15 is nice Overall, I think this collection of songs is too slow, like not even Lana sings this slow, but that might just be my taste. I wish you opened your mouth properly when singing and enunciated more, the vocal delivery is so drawn out and slow IMO, again I don't know if it's your style or just something that sort of happened. 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Serene Queen 4,786 Posted April 20, 2018 If you even need a co-writer, I’m a pretty good songwriter. AMAZING btw!! 0 Quote Hell, I Suppose if You Stick Around Long Enough, They Have to Say Something Nice About You Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PARADIXO 32,925 Posted April 20, 2018 Hey Came here from your status update. I had a quick listen to all of the songs and I just want to let you know your record is pretty good. I liked every single track, especially from 4 to 10. It sets such a great mood. Also, the lyrics are really good too. I really like the sound of the album, it's just like a psychedelic dream, like I'm hovering over the sea and the trees on a sunny and windy day. Sometimes I felt It was kinda slow though, but still beautiful, nonetheless. How I wish I could do something like this. Great Record. Thank you soooo much!!! You asked for people to listen to your songs so I actually listened to the whole thing and wrote down my honest thoughts about each one. black - too languid, it's just really slow speaking over this ambient noise promises - the part at 1:33 is very pretty, your voice is sounds good in this. I like the music box sounds at 2:20. Feels like it drags on after 3:30 and loses it's energy. What We Had Has Come and Gone - The intro is pretty, I like the instrumental. Best one yet. Mother - You need to improve your vocal delivery, I think this song would sound so much better if you didn't sing in this mumbling kind of way although that might be your style/what you are into IDK Inside You - the piano in the background is really nice Your Night - I like the distant vocals around the minute mark, there it's finally proper vocals not this "mumbling/speaking with my hand in front of my mouth" kind of singing that seems to be on most tracks. This has the best vocal production imo in the second half it sounds great. Fall - I like the part between 50-1:10 the catchiest thing I heard on this album. This "moving side by side" sound that is the part of the instrumental becomes annoying by the time the song gets to the 2:40 mark I wish it would stop at that point. Like it's nice but gets too much. The Waves - "The sand is calling my soul The waves dance to this song The wind blows cold I couldn't care less These strings are meeting the water They're getting along Much better than I do with people" I think these are the best lyrics on the album. You are right the instrumental is similar to 13 beaches a bit at some points. At Last - I like the held note at 2:55 and the part at 4:15 is nice Overall, I think this collection of songs is too slow, like not even Lana sings this slow, but that might just be my taste. I wish you opened your mouth properly when singing and enunciated more, the vocal delivery is so drawn out and slow IMO, again I don't know if it's your style or just something that sort of happened. Wow thank you so much for this! I really appreciate it. Yes, the vocals are always a very weak spot for me... However I don't focus on them. I see my voice as just another sound. That's why i add so much reverb and stuff. I think I sound much better live. I feel like I sound good in some songs and kinda weak in others. I thought I sounded terrible in Your Night and yes it's soooo slow but that's my style. This is actually the most uptempo thing I've done hahahaha. Again thank you SO much for taking your time!! If you even need a co-writer, I’m a pretty good songwriter. AMAZING btw!! Thank you!! My experience with co-writing was good and exciting so I'll definitely pm you! X 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PARADIXO 32,925 Posted April 28, 2018 613 streams and 46 likes 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PARADIXO 32,925 Posted May 4, 2018 first show for the record last night!!!! angel fall white mustang the waves black https://www.instagram.com/p/BiVZW3iAN3B/?taken-by=aaronmusician 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PARADIXO 32,925 Posted December 17, 2018 NEW SONG! BABY MOONSTONE I'll release an EP called Gemstones 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charlottexseax 7,917 Posted December 17, 2018 The melody is kinda cool!!, but the voice needs better training. I read a few posts above that you said you don't want it to be the focus of your music, which is understandable (every artist does what they prefer), but regardless I think you should try and strengthen it a bit. You can take Sufjan Steven as an example. His voice is somewhat "thin" but consistent throughout the record(s) and it sounds overall pleasant I suggest you look into him and Beach House, which kinda both sound like they could fit into the sound you're trying to make!! 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PARADIXO 32,925 Posted December 19, 2018 The melody is kinda cool!!, but the voice needs better training. I read a few posts above that you said you don't want it to be the focus of your music, which is understandable (every artist does what they prefer), but regardless I think you should try and strengthen it a bit. You can take Sufjan Steven as an example. His voice is somewhat "thin" but consistent throughout the record(s) and it sounds overall pleasant I suggest you look into him and Beach House, which kinda both sound like they could fit into the sound you're trying to make!! thank you!! and yes vocally they're what i'm into. i do my best with my voice tbh :/ but really im not a good singer at all lol. btw i just released another one (my voice sounds even worse here lol) 0 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Serene Queen 4,786 Posted December 21, 2018 I love this! The production, lyrics, everything. I also love your voice, and I don’t usually like male singers!! This is amazing!! 0 Quote Hell, I Suppose if You Stick Around Long Enough, They Have to Say Something Nice About You Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PARADIXO 32,925 Posted December 21, 2018 I love this! The production, lyrics, everything. I also love your voice, and I don’t usually like male singers!! This is amazing!! Ahh thank you sooo much <3 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Beautiful Loser 48,626 Posted January 17, 2019 Napalm Death - The Zelda nerd in me liked that you used Song of Healing hehe, but omg, I got a heart attack when I saw that doggy running away with the firework! I hope nobody got hurt. I think it was really clever of you to use the sound of fireworks mixed with crying dogs, that honestly hurt to hear. Very smart move to get people to understand what your message is. And, again, I’m sorry about your dog. Pets mean so much, I sometimes still dream about my parrot or think that she’s sitting on the kitchen door even though she passed away many years ago now. Aventurine - This somehow made me think of Snow Patrol even though their songs don’t sound like this? Or maybe they do, I haven’t heard that many tbh lol, but I like your voice! I know it’s just a demo so maybe the lyrics would be heard better if there was a final version...? So unfair that your laptop got stolen. Baby Moonstone - That bass! This beat! Really interesting that you kept the melody of your singing different throughout the song when the background music itself was kinda repetitive, I like that. Too bad that it was so short, I’d love it if you added the same melody you had in the beginning (“Call me if you ever get lost” etc) towards the end... but then again, I’m not sure how I would wrap up the song if I did that. I just liked that melody, hehe. Good work!! The Sky Right Now - I remember this one for being a heavy song... and I can tell that this one is pretty personal too. You’re brave for putting words to your emotions and writing a song out of them. This is personally not my kind of music, but you did a good job. I liked the subtle beats. Hugs! 0 Quote LANABOARDS DEMOGRAPHICS SURVEY 2024 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PARADIXO 32,925 Posted January 17, 2019 Napalm Death - The Zelda nerd in me liked that you used Song of Healing hehe, but omg, I got a heart attack when I saw that doggy running away with the firework! I hope nobody got hurt. I think it was really clever of you to use the sound of fireworks mixed with crying dogs, that honestly hurt to hear. Very smart move to get people to understand what your message is. And, again, I’m sorry about your dog. Pets mean so much, I sometimes still dream about my parrot or think that she’s sitting on the kitchen door even though she passed away many years ago now. Aventurine - This somehow made me think of Snow Patrol even though their songs don’t sound like this? Or maybe they do, I haven’t heard that many tbh lol, but I like your voice! I know it’s just a demo so maybe the lyrics would be heard better if there was a final version...? So unfair that your laptop got stolen. Baby Moonstone - That bass! This beat! Really interesting that you kept the melody of your singing different throughout the song when the background music itself was kinda repetitive, I like that. Too bad that it was so short, I’d love it if you added the same melody you had in the beginning (“Call me if you ever get lost” etc) towards the end... but then again, I’m not sure how I would wrap up the song if I did that. I just liked that melody, hehe. Good work!! The Sky Right Now - I remember this one for being a heavy song... and I can tell that this one is pretty personal too. You’re brave for putting words to your emotions and writing a song out of them. This is personally not my kind of music, but you did a good job. I liked the subtle beats. Hugs! aww thank you so much <3 love your napalm death review. i really apreciate it. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Beautiful Loser 48,626 Posted January 17, 2019 aww thank you so much <3 love your napalm death review. i really apreciate it. I think that's the one I will remember the best because you hit like an emotional spot. =P 1 Quote LANABOARDS DEMOGRAPHICS SURVEY 2024 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PARADIXO 32,925 Posted March 22, 2019 hey guys!! so today i put out an instrumental, 22-minute long EP Music for Sleeping gorgeous ambient music this is my favorite song: 'strawberry leaves' i hope you like it! 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites