Jackson Novem

[GLOW 69]

Ok I listened to Slaughterhouse and Trans-Suburban Fantasy and idk how to feel about it Excluding Slaughterhouse (it just doesn't work imo sounds like you're trying too hard), the songwriting is really good.

 

I feel like you have a really good understanding on how to write a pop song. I think you should definitely invest in some professional producing/recording software. I can tell that you don't use much autotune or pitch correction and I would definitely consider using it if I were you. You have a good voice but it's weak in the sense that it's often cracking or off-key. Even a small amount of correction makes the whole song better. I don't know if you're taking voice lessons but I think you need more training to build a stronger voice.

 

The production is good but not great. I feel like you have good production up until the halfway point in the songs. The majority of your songs seem kind of monotone because there's not enough build-up in the final chorus, like the whole song is leading up to somewhere but it never quite reaches that point. But good job on what you have, it's better than what a lot of people could do.

 

Not meant to be rude, just sharing my thoughts.

[Jack 2,919]

Ok I listened to Slaughterhouse and Trans-Suburban Fantasy and idk how to feel about it Excluding Slaughterhouse (it just doesn't work imo sounds like you're trying too hard), the songwriting is really good.

 

I feel like you have a really good understanding on how to write a pop song. I think you should definitely invest in some professional producing/recording software. I can tell that you don't use much autotune or pitch correction and I would definitely consider using it if I were you. You have a good voice but it's weak in the sense that it's often cracking or off-key. Even a small amount of correction makes the whole song better. I don't know if you're taking voice lessons but I think you need more training to build a stronger voice.

 

The production is good but not great. I feel like you have good production up until the halfway point in the songs. The majority of your songs seem kind of monotone because there's not enough build-up in the final chorus, like the whole song is leading up to somewhere but it never quite reaches that point. But good job on what you have, it's better than what a lot of people could do.

 

Not meant to be rude, just sharing my thoughts.

Thank you for honest feedback that points out both good things and bad things in a helpful way, I don't get that near enough,

(I really like slaughterhouse and I made it the lead single for my second album Bc it is one of the most catchy from the second album, but most of the rest of the upcoming album is a little more natural) I've been working on my voice everyday with little vocal exercises and singing along to song that expand my range and help me strengthen my voice, yeah I could probably use a teensie bit of auto tune on small bits, and production wise my music so far has been produced on my iPad, but for my 3rd album I really want to expand to other programs and begin to cowrite! thank you for honest critiques and kind compliments! also what were some of your favorites that you listened to?

[Jack 2,919]

Slaughterhouse video coming soon also new single too!

[Trash Magic 28,425]

[Trash Magic 28,425]

change your avi 

[Jack 2,919]

Uhhh how about no

[Jack 2,919]

Check out my new website redesigned by the great @@Trash Magic ! http://www.jacksonnovem.com

[Trash Magic 28,425]

this is so stan worthy http://nebula.wsimg.com/4908fbd466f76282352553324ba4fc9d?AccessKeyId=4B716C53EF0FA92088DE&disposition=0&alloworigin=1

[Jack 2,919]

this is so stan worthy http://nebula.wsimg.com/4908fbd466f76282352553324ba4fc9d?AccessKeyId=4B716C53EF0FA92088DE&disposition=0&alloworigin=1

It really is

[BlueJeans 2,608]

Nice, clean and simple .. Are the "buttons" (can't remember the english word for "onglets", sorry haha) meant to be the size they are ? 

Are the lyrics going to be posted, eventually ? 

[Jack 2,919]

Nice, clean and simple .. Are the "buttons" (can't remember the english word for "onglets", sorry haha) meant to be the size they are ? 

Are the lyrics going to be posted, eventually ?

 

Yes in the next few days I'll be putting them up continually

[TRENCH 15,450]

You got competition in both appearance and vocals https://soundcloud.com/siralex1997/kesha-wolf-song-cover  

[Atom Heart 1,931]

You got competition in both appearance and vocals https://soundcloud.com/siralex1997/kesha-wolf-song-cover

 

You got competition in both appearance and vocals https://soundcloud.com/siralex1997/kesha-wolf-song-cover

I'm screaming

[Jack 2,919]

You got competition in both appearance and vocals https://soundcloud.com/siralex1997/kesha-wolf-song-cover  

But I have originality

[Jack 2,919]

New music video!

[Jack 2,919]

Which song have you guys liked more so far from white noise? Tears of Gold or Slaughterhouse, also what do think of the album so far?

[Jack 2,919]

I'm so ecited to show you all this album, I've worked so hard and put so much effort into it, ughhh

[Trash Magic 28,425]

and we are excited to listen and illegally download.

[Trash Magic 28,425]

ITUNES LESOTHO

[Jack 2,919]

ITUNES LESOTHO

Why you listening to Forrest Gump tho....