Collaborative Poetry

[Three White Butterflies 27,477]

Since Lana isn't on social media and we're waiting for anything, I decided to come up with a new game.

 

COLLABORATIVE POETRY! 

 

How it works:

I will start by writing a line of a poem. 

Subsequent users will follow by adding their own line to the poem.

Once we've reached 10 lines the poem will be completed. 

Copy and Paste the previous lines into your response so we know how many lines there are.

 

Once a poem has been completed, whoever writes the next line starts a new poem.

 

It goes on and on forever and we get to make art together.

 

Please don't feel intimidated that you have to be a writing expert or anything, this is just for fun! 

 

 

RULES:

-Don't be offensive or rude

-Do not change any part of the poem, you can only add a new line.

 

 

First line of our poem:

 

He stood up and paused staring silently under the stars

[Deadly Nightshade 12,852]

He stood up and paused staring silently under the stars

He is a nocturnalist , chasing dreams is just the price he pays 

 

 

( i tried )

[Alison by Slowdive 26,146]

He stood up and paused staring silently under the stars

He is a nocturnalist, chasing dreams is just the price he pays

And the haloed Hollywood sign is staring back at him in praise

[Dark Angel 202,297]

He stood up and paused staring silently under the stars

He is a nocturnalist, chasing dreams is just the price he pays

And the haloed Hollywood sign is staring back at him in praise

Every night before, the velvet dark sky was void of any light or life

[everymanhashiswish 884]

He stood up and paused staring silently under the stars

He is a nocturnalist, chasing dreams is just the price he pays

And the haloed Hollywood sign is staring back at him in praise

Every night before, the velvet dark sky was void of any light or life
Hateful now under the bleak haze of gazing Hollywood, plugged bright

[Three White Butterflies 27,477]

this is so good ya'll are amazing!!!! 5 more lines and we have our first poem. 

[prettywhenimhigh 49,329]

this thread is for the big brains bitches I'm too dumb for this game lmfao

[Three White Butterflies 27,477]

2 minutes ago, prettywhenimhigh said:

this thread is for the big brains bitches I'm too dumb for this game lmfao

 

literally just write anything we're all winging it 

[IanadeIrey 62,021]

He stood up and paused staring silently under the stars

He is a nocturnalist, chasing dreams is just the price he pays

And the haloed Hollywood sign is staring back at him in praise

Every night before, the velvet dark sky was void of any light or life
Hateful now under the bleak haze of gazing Hollywood, plugged bright
For sequinned stars on silver screens whose smiles wore plight 

[Dark Angel 202,297]

He stood up and paused staring silently under the stars

He is a nocturnalist, chasing dreams is just the price he pays

And the haloed Hollywood sign is staring back at him in praise

Every night before, the velvet dark sky was void of any light or life
Hateful now under the bleak haze of gazing Hollywood, plugged bright
For sequinned stars on silver screens whose smiles wore plight 

He saw himself in the mirror of stars and had realized he was simply ordinary

[prettywhenimhigh 49,329]

lanaboards bent backwards over the grass

[Three White Butterflies 27,477]

He stood up and paused staring silently under the stars

He is a nocturnalist, chasing dreams is just the price he pays

And the haloed Hollywood sign is staring back at him in praise

Every night before, the velvet dark sky was void of any light or life

 

Hateful now under the bleak haze of gazing Hollywood, plugged bright
For sequinned stars on silver screens whose smiles wore plight 

He saw himself in the mirror of stars and had realized he was simply ordinary

So he took a string and cast it into the sky hoping to catch something to bring him back to life

 

[Frangipani 11,612]

He stood up and paused staring silently under the stars

He is a nocturnalist, chasing dreams is just the price he pays

And the haloed Hollywood sign is staring back at him in praise

Every night before, the velvet dark sky was void of any light or life

 

Hateful now under the bleak haze of gazing Hollywood, plugged bright
For sequinned stars on silver screens whose smiles wore plight 

He saw himself in the mirror of stars and had realized he was simply ordinary

So he took a string and cast it into the sky hoping to catch something to bring him back to life

And in the depths of dark above he found a shard of light

[Three White Butterflies 27,477]

ONE MORE LINE! 

[Dark Angel 202,297]

He stood up and paused staring silently under the stars

He is a nocturnalist, chasing dreams is just the price he pays

And the haloed Hollywood sign is staring back at him in praise

Every night before, the velvet dark sky was void of any light or life

 

Hateful now under the bleak haze of gazing Hollywood, plugged bright
For sequinned stars on silver screens whose smiles wore plight 

He saw himself in the mirror of stars and had realized he was simply ordinary

So he took a string and cast it into the sky hoping to catch something to bring him back to life

And in the depths of dark above he found a shard of light

It was then, he realized, he could make stars out of beach's sand & fireflies

[Alison by Slowdive 26,146]

omg whats the title of our baby

[Frangipani 11,612]

3 minutes ago, Alison by Slowdive said:

omg whats the title of our baby

'Fishing for Stars' maybe?

 

[Three White Butterflies 27,477]

Fishing for Stars

 

4 minutes ago, Surf Noir said:

He stood up and paused staring silently under the stars

He is a nocturnalist, chasing dreams is just the price he pays

And the haloed Hollywood sign is staring back at him in praise

Every night before, the velvet dark sky was void of any light or life

 

Hateful now under the bleak haze of gazing Hollywood, plugged bright
For sequinned stars on silver screens whose smiles wore plight 

He saw himself in the mirror of stars and had realized he was simply ordinary

So he took a string and cast it into the sky hoping to catch something to bring him back to life

And in the depths of dark above he found a shard of light

It was then, he realized, he could make stars out of beach's sand & fireflies

 

[xxmissdaytonaxx 30,078]

this is such a cute idea. i wanna participate. 

[Three White Butterflies 27,477]

a new poem can be started! just a reminder the poem will be 10 lines in total. once a poem has been created, the next person can start the first line of a new one!