Write A "Lana" Song For Someone To Record

[fl0r1dakil0s 20,676]

lipsters have a lot to say about lana's writing so let's see how we can do.. 

 

rules

 

- based on any post in this thread (which could be an image(s) or words or both), try to write "lana del rey style" lyrics

- it doesn't have to be the post directly above you, if you use another person's post just quote it

- if you don't want to write something you can still post something to give someone inspiration

- the lyrics can be whatever you want them to be but try to include some sort of iconic lana reference or metaphor

 

the fun part (obviously you don't need to write a full "song" but if you do)

 

- in a week i'll choose my four favorite "lana songs" from the replies and make a poll where people can vote for the one they want to hear

 

- for the song that wins the poll, i'm going to find someone on fiverr to record the song in "lana del rey's style"

 

to be eligible for the poll

 

- your fake lana song can have whatever structure you want but there should at least be four separate "stanzas" of lyrics

- for the instrumental of the song, you can pick one from youtube (if you search "lana del rey type beat" on youtube you can find a lot) but it should somewhat make sense with the lyrics you write (so they match)

- if you don't pick an instrumental i will pick one for you

 

example (hypothetical of how this would go)

 

Person A: DNC, Northern California, foggy ocean vibes (yes a certain person's lies inspired my fake scenario it's just what came to mind first)

Person B: (fake DNC song here)

[Get Drunk 17,479]

Dreams, hazy, blue, spotlight, stars🙏
 

(love this idea!!)

[fl0r1dakil0s 20,676]

someone write a song that gives.. lizzy grant gangster lolita at coney island

[bambi eyes 1,807]

 

9 hours ago, fl0r1dakil0s said:

someone write a song that gives.. lizzy grant gangster lolita at coney island

im gonna try to write a song just for the fun of it... 

could end up being really bad but ill try my best. might mix some carmen vibes into it, if thats okay?

[cherrytropico 10,103]

9 hours ago, VioletBunny said:

Dreams, hazy, blue, spotlight, stars🙏
 

(love this idea!!)

someone write a song with this instrumental

 

edit: 

this instrumental can fit as well  

[honeybadger 40,620]

maybe someone should try and finish this 

 

 

[The Siren 29,050]

12 hours ago, honeybadger said:

maybe someone should try and finish this 

 

 

i was about to post this thread here

[Make me your Dream Life 83,144]

was it worth it that i got wasted in my blue chevy nova i knew it was over but i couldn't admit it 

oh, what do I say? 
we've fallen through the cracks 

told him there's nothing to worry about- if it's me 
i'm goin far, to see where i land 
would you go w me? 
do i ask of you, that? 

i'm literally vibing to this in my head rn 

 

wait hold on I wanted to lyk that this only took a few seconds but I gotta stop before it becomes a thing

[fl0r1dakil0s 20,676]

1 hour ago, Fever said:

was it worth it that i got wasted in my blue chevy nova i knew it was over but i couldn't admit it 

oh, what do I say? 
we've fallen through the cracks 

told him there's nothing to worry about- if it's me 
i'm goin far, to see where i land 
would you go w me? 
do i ask of you, that? 

i'm literally vibing to this in my head rn 

 

wasted in the blue chevy nova PLSSSS 😭 new song title 

 

it's giving buttered noodles on the veranda 

[Lindsay Lohan 6,906]

I present Dangerous.... a trailer-trash Lizzy gem

I tried to use as many Lizzy cliché's as possible 

 

Dangerous 

 

I was girl that they call Tropicana

Rollercoasters and a cherry cola by the sea

Throwing their fate in the sand by the shore

Living dangerously 

 

And Jimmy he would smile in his blue and white strips

Cigarette stuck in the side of his mouth 

Taking me back with his Pontiac smile

Let's show the whole crowd what this summer town's all about

Living Dangerously, 

We was so dangerous, we was living dangerously

 

I was the girl they call Miss America

Tinsel frown and rose red lips in a crown

Throwing me love in confetti so fond

Living dangerously 

 

And Jimmy would laugh with his jersey shore flag

Sparkler in the palm of his hand

Taking me back with his blue Chevy smile

Let's show the whole crowd what this trailer park's all about

Living Dangerously, 

We was so dangerous, we was living dangerously

 

Betty Lou and Lana Rey

Dreaming about Monterey 

Serving up a heartbreak

In my sad Motel-6 mistake

I want to live forever

I want to live forever

 

Living dangerously 

We were so dangerous

Living dangerously 

We was living dangerously

[fl0r1dakil0s 20,676]

On 12/29/2022 at 11:49 PM, Lindsay Lohan said:

I present Dangerous.... a trailer-trash Lizzy gem

I tried to use as many Lizzy cliché's as possible 

 

Dangerous 

 

I was girl that they call Tropicana

Rollercoasters and a cherry cola by the sea

Throwing their fate in the sand by the shore

Living dangerously 

 

And Jimmy he would smile in his blue and white strips

Cigarette stuck in the side of his mouth 

Taking me back with his Pontiac smile

Let's show the whole crowd what this summer town's all about

Living Dangerously, 

We was so dangerous, we was living dangerously

 

I was the girl they call Miss America

Tinsel frown and rose red lips in a crown

Throwing me love in confetti so fond

Living dangerously 

 

And Jimmy would laugh with his jersey shore flag

Sparkler in the palm of his hand

Taking me back with his blue Chevy smile

Let's show the whole crowd what this trailer park's all about

Living Dangerously, 

We was so dangerous, we was living dangerously

 

Betty Lou and Lana Rey

Dreaming about Monterey 

Serving up a heartbreak

In my sad Motel-6 mistake

I want to live forever

I want to live forever

 

Living dangerously 

We were so dangerous

Living dangerously 

We was living dangerously

 

no bc u ate this up so hard.. it's giving hundred dollar bill pt 2.. i wanna try writing a lizzy song too 

[fl0r1dakil0s 20,676]

On 12/28/2022 at 11:57 PM, VioletBunny said:

Dreams, hazy, blue, spotlight, stars🙏
 

(love this idea!!)

 

Waist Deep In Icy Waves (Lizzy's Version)

 

The spotlight never lasts forever, follow me now
You call me your starlet so be my director, push me down
Levitating in the bar, you call me your painting, your shooting star
I feel like I can't touch the ground, like a ferris wheel, spin me round

 

The hunter Orion shines bright in the sky 
Only constellations compare to those times 
You blew my mind, made my stars align
Leo the lion roars from the night sky 
Only constellations compare to those times 
You were sublime, all the stars aligned

 

You're so cruel it changes to cool, follow me now 
If you wanna see me, i'll be by the pool, push me down
Palm trees on streets and your warm summer breeze, that's all I need now 
You made me realize how sweet life can be, Jim can't compete now 

 

The hunter Orion shines bright in the sky 
Only constellations compare to those times 
You blew my mind, made my stars align
Leo the lion roars from the night sky 
Only constellations compare to those times 
You were sublime, all the stars aligned

 

Waist deep in icy waves
You're insane but you're my baby
Waist deep in icy waves
Call me insane, you drove me crazy 
Waist deep in icy waves
You're insane but you're my baby
Waist deep in icy waves
Call me insane, you drove me crazy, baby

[YourGirl666 12,072]

carry me to your place
take me far away
far enough to see
gray clouds turn to waves in the ocean

hold me like I'm your baby
let's pretend for a day
we are more than two kids
making it through NY

there's just no reason to run
boy, you know what kills me
so don't be afraid
push me down so I feel safe
I just can't relate
being free to escape

won't you color my world blue
like you used to do
I am yours to play

night gets colder as I try
to feel good and smile
catch me by the waves

my soul's yours to take