LDR Songs That Would Benefit From A Complete Rework

[meIanchoIia 968]

Just do something with For Free (but I think that might be unfixable)

[ultrabanisters 44,631]

1 minute ago, ShadesOfFool said:

bless your heart but we are truly out of things to talk about

me seeing the fourth thread of the day being created and titled 'what food would you be if you could only choose to be a vegetable beginning with c'

 

also i struggled so hard to think of a song to amend production on some of your suggestions are... questionable 

[Come With Me 3,135]

1 minute ago, ultrabanisters said:

me seeing the fourth thread of the day being created and titled 'what food would you be if you could only choose to be a vegetable beginning with c'

I’d definitely be Carrot !!!

[ultrabanisters 44,631]

Just now, Dark City said:

I’d be Carrot !!!

inb4 @Make me your Dream Life or @Embach make it a thread 

[Lana Del Dufrene 10,082]

3 hours ago, Strangelove said:

 

5. Angels Forever, Forever Angels. I think the song falls flat on being ambient and serious somewhat. I think it would benefit from being turned into an electronic song similar to Brite Lites or Boom Like That because the chorus is seriously catchy. 

So you wanna make the song worse . I do agree its in need of a rework but not like that.

Edited July 13 by DemonMic2003

[Rorman Nockwell 56,491]

2 minutes ago, ultrabanisters said:

me seeing the fourth thread of the day being created and titled 'what food would you be if you could only choose to be a vegetable beginning with c'

A cos lettuce so I could roll around and remove layers in the summer heat 

Also I like green 

This is deep shit 

5 minutes ago, meIanchoIia said:

Just do something with For Free (but I think that might be unfixable)

Change it to For FEE and make it about feet pix

[ultrabanisters 44,631]

3 minutes ago, Rorman Nockwell said:

A cos lettuce so I could roll around and remove layers in the summer heat 

Also I like green 

This is deep shit 

in the summer heat, i shed my skin,
wrapped in cos' leaves, i'm free within...
peeling layers off, feeling evergreen,
loving every shade of nature's scene... 

 

[Coloringbooks 13,933]

3 hours ago, Strangelove said:

5. Angels Forever, Forever Angels. I think the song falls flat on being ambient and serious somewhat. I think it would benefit from being turned into an electronic song similar to Brite Lites or Boom Like That because the chorus is seriously catchy. 

This is the most random thing ever DKFHKFDHKHK but you're kind of valid... I'm not the biggest Boom Like That fan, but I need more weird Brite Lites-sounding songs

[Zodiac Dancer 2,213]

Watercolor eyes  This is one of my favorite songs but I think it would benefit from some better verses. Also the song should’ve been on blue banisters  I love the outtakes but cutting new songs for outtakes is insane.

[Rorman Nockwell 56,491]

3 minutes ago, ultrabanisters said:

in the summer heat, i shed my skin,
wrapped in cos' leaves, i'm free within...
peeling layers off, feeling evergreen,
loving every shade of nature's scene... 

 

Manual "like"

[Eugene 26,661]

Text Book needs a change of lyrics. I see no relation between going blonde and BLM and all the nonsensical shit she says. Yeah, it's her worst song.

 

But to be honest, I love the "Old Man River" outro.

[southbeachswing 3,827]

I've never liked the instrumental of 1949  i think it would benefit from having a Hawaiian Tropic / Spin Me Round type of vibe if that makes sense, like more drums and beats or something

[Lana Del Dufrene 10,082]

For Free - make it a solo cover with fuller production.

 

Angels Forever, Forever Angels - make it more guitar based and record the drum to sound more live (similar to the uv tracks)

 

Fucked My Way Up To The Top - add in some of the electric guitar from the demo in to the final… maybe umph up the drum a tad.

 

Chemtrails (The Album) - like alot of people have said more fuller production. 
 

Blue Banisters (The Album) - same as Chemtrails, fuller production.

 

TNBAR - replace all the acoustic guitar with a soft electric guitar, also keep the demo lyrics but the shortened outro.

 

Kill Kill - add in The Ocean demo first verse. 

Edited July 14 by DemonMic2003

[Strangelove 1,838]

1 hour ago, DemonMic2003 said:

So you wanna make the song worse . I do agree its in need of a rework but not like that.

 

1 hour ago, Coloringbooks said:

This is the most random thing ever DKFHKFDHKHK but you're kind of valid... I'm not the biggest Boom Like That fan, but I need more weird Brite Lites-sounding songs

You see the vision though! 

[Lana Del Dufrene 10,082]

Oh and Is This Happiness - make it more guitar based while keeping the piano

[details 17,029]

arcadia

[Lana Del Dufrene 10,082]

1 minute ago, details said:

arcadia

Arcadia is beautiful the way she is. Dont judge her

[details 17,029]

1 minute ago, DemonMic2003 said:

Arcadia is beautiful the way she is. Dont judge her

no she needs some strings 

[Lana Del Dufrene 10,082]

Just now, details said:

no she needs some strings 

Oop ok

[pin up galore 18,963]

I think Black Bathing Suit done more in the style of Ocean Blvd songs like A&W and Zodiac would make it a lot better  maybe it could use a lil Jack still keeping the messy unhinged style ending but with better processed vocals and I think the weird drums could've been executed better than they are on BB