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  1. American Bottom liked a post in a topic by letsescapelizzy in Barrie-James O'Neill Says Lana Broke Up With Him Via Interview   
    Happy Thanksgiving Shadesofkool822
  2. American Bottom liked a post in a topic by Trash Magic in Burnt Norton Video Coming!   
    if all videos are eternally teasers
    the full cuts are unredeemable 
  3. delreyfreak liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Rank Honeymoon Tracks from Best to Worst   
    (Best to worst)
    1.God Knows I Tried
    2.Music To Watch Boys To
    3. 24
    4. Salvatore
    5. Terrence Loves You
    6. Religion
    7. Freak
    8. Honeymoon
    9.High By The Beach
    10. Art Deco
    11. The Blackest Day (it's lyrically amazing and I can relate heavily, but I think it should have been more like God Knows I tried, with smooth orchestras in the second half)
    12. Don't Let Me Be Misunderstood( bc it was a let down imo)
    13. Swan Song (It's simple, but elegant. Yet its missing something that would really give it the sortve extravagance that Salvatore has)
    14. Burnt Norton.....bc it's fucking burnt norton
  4. Januli liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Barrie-James O'Neill Says Lana Broke Up With Him Via Interview   
    Happy Thanksgiving everyone
  5. MermaidMotelle liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Misheard Lana Lyrics   
    Omg I hear that
  6. salvatore liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Screenplays by ShadesOfKool822   
    Music video screenplays written by Shadesofkool822. Including GKIT, and more to come
    (Intro)
    Montage of a funeral, and lana in a veil crying on the steps of a church.
    (Sometimes I wake up…)
    She awakens in a cemetery, with a red rose in her hands, and dried blood from holding the thorns tightly. She wears a blue wedding dress. The sky is a hazy yellow color.
    *The camera pans upwards towards the hazy sky, and the scene disintegrates into a flashback of a wedding.
    (Its so crazy..)
    The bride and groom intertwine their arms, and share glasses of wine.
    (Put on that Hotel California)
    The lovers dance slowly in the center of the ballroom, wearing matching blue gown and suit..As “Hotel California)
    (I feel free)
    *The memory fades away, and the camera looks from a far angle
    lana surveys the area..where not a single other person is in sight. Only slight morning fog surround the area.
    (God Knows I Lived)
    *A flash of light fills the screen, then gradually reveals the next scene
    The lovers drive away from the church, cans dragging behind the little bullet car. Off into the sunset
    (God Knows I Tried)
    *Another flash, and it gradually fades back into the hazy sky, and the camera pans back downwards to the her as she sits up against a Headstone. Her back hiding the name. Mascara driven tears streak her face.
    *The screen fades to black…then slowly reveals the next scene
    (Sometimes I wake up)
    She wakes up on a bed in a hotel room, as red blue and yellow lights shine in from the glass balcony slide door…shining directly upon her as she looks around the empty room. Her man…no where to be found.
    (On Monday, they destroyed me)
    she cries..begging on her knees as her lover (wearing an all black suit, with a briefcase in hand) leaves the room.
    ~Timelapse~
    The timelapse shows her crying and drinking herself unconscious over the next few days(Monday through Thursday) and on the last day (Friday), she finally cleans up a little and leaves the hotel.
    *Timelapse ends
    (Put on that hotel California, wear my blinders in the rain)
    She walks on the sidewalk, barely escaping the rain. wearing a blue coat and a dark blue NY baseball cap and a pair of shades.
    (Ive got nothing much to live for, ever since I found my fame)
    Paparazzi spots her, and cameras flash all around her.
    *The camera moves in close to her side as she shoves the photographers
    You can see her mouth the iconic phrase “Let Me F***ing do what im F***ing doing”
    (God Knows I lived)
    *The sound of lightning and thunder fills the air, and the scene fades into a funeral. Lana, wearing a black dress with a veil, places her hand on top of the closed casket as tears run down her face
    She runs out of the church, and cries on the steps (like the opening scene)
     
    (God Knows I tried)
    A flashback of lana in a dark alley way, holding a dead man in her arms. Crying in the rain.
    *The camera films from above lana, as she sings the final line “God knows I tried”.
    Sidenote: I was thinking the man she loved, was Salvatore. And that in her new short film or whatever, these two songs tie in together. And that the video for Salvatore would come before this and also feauture the full wedding scene.
  7. kik liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Barrie-James O'Neill Says Lana Broke Up With Him Via Interview   
    Happy Thanksgiving everyone
  8. Anthem liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Barrie-James O'Neill Says Lana Broke Up With Him Via Interview   
    Happy Thanksgiving everyone
  9. BeautifulAnywhere liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Burnt Norton Video Coming!   
    Yeah, I added that part last minute, because I wasn't sure how to use the "I've got nothing much to love for, ever since I found my fame" line. But thanks so much to you and everyone who read and gave feed back. I also have screenplays for 24, Art Deco, and Swan Song
  10. ZeroZero liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Burnt Norton Video Coming!   
    @@GangstaBoy i finally typed up the screenplay for GKIT. 
    (Intro)
    Montage of a funeral, and lana in a veil crying on the steps of a church.
    (Sometimes I wake up…)
    She awakens in a cemetery, with a red rose in her hands, and dried blood from holding the thorns tightly. She wears a blue wedding dress. The sky is a hazy yellow color. 
    *The camera pans upwards towards the hazy sky, and the scene disintegrates into a flashback of a wedding.
    (Its so crazy..)
    The bride and groom intertwine their arms, and share glasses of wine.
    (Put on that Hotel California)
    The lovers dance slowly in the center of the ballroom, wearing matching blue gown and suit..As “Hotel California)
    (I feel free)
    *The memory fades away, and the camera looks from a far angle
    lana surveys the area..where not a single other person is in sight. Only slight morning fog surround the area.
    (God Knows I Lived)
    *A flash of light fills the screen, then gradually reveals the next scene
    The lovers drive away from the church, cans dragging behind the little bullet car. Off into the sunset
    (God Knows I Tried)
    *Another flash, and it gradually fades back into the hazy sky, and the camera pans back downwards to the her as she sits up against a Headstone. Her back hiding the name. Mascara driven tears streak her face.
    *The screen fades to black…then slowly reveals the next scene
    (Sometimes I wake up)
    She wakes up on a bed in a hotel room, as red blue and yellow lights shine in from the glass balcony slide door…shining directly upon her as she looks around the empty room. Her man…no where to be found.
    (On Monday, they destroyed me)
    she cries..begging on her knees as her lover (wearing an all black suit, with a briefcase in hand) leaves the room. 
    ~Timelapse~
    The timelapse shows her crying and drinking herself unconscious over the next few days(Monday through Thursday) and on the last day (Friday), she finally cleans up a little and leaves the hotel.
    *Timelapse ends
    (Put on that hotel California, wear my blinders in the rain)
    She walks on the sidewalk, barely escaping the rain. wearing a blue coat and a dark blue NY baseball cap and a pair of shades. 
    (Ive got nothing much to live for, ever since I found my fame)
    Paparazzi spots her, and cameras flash all around her. 
    *The camera moves in close to her side as she shoves the photographers
    You can see her mouth the iconic phrase “Let Me F***ing do what im F***ing doing”
    (God Knows I lived)
    *The sound of lightning and thunder fills the air, and the scene fades into a funeral. Lana, wearing a black dress with a veil, places her hand on top of the closed casket as tears run down her face
    She runs out of the church, and cries on the steps (like the opening scene)
     
    (God Knows I tried)
    A flashback of lana in a dark alley way, holding a dead man in her arms. Crying in the rain.
    *The camera films from above lana, as she sings the final line “God knows I tried”.
    Sidenote: I was thinking the man she loved, was Salvatore. And that in her new short film or whatever, these two songs tie in together. And that the video for Salvatore would come before this and also feauture the full wedding scene.  
  11. MermaidMotelle liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Screenplays by ShadesOfKool822   
    Music video screenplays written by Shadesofkool822. Including GKIT, and more to come
    (Intro)
    Montage of a funeral, and lana in a veil crying on the steps of a church.
    (Sometimes I wake up…)
    She awakens in a cemetery, with a red rose in her hands, and dried blood from holding the thorns tightly. She wears a blue wedding dress. The sky is a hazy yellow color.
    *The camera pans upwards towards the hazy sky, and the scene disintegrates into a flashback of a wedding.
    (Its so crazy..)
    The bride and groom intertwine their arms, and share glasses of wine.
    (Put on that Hotel California)
    The lovers dance slowly in the center of the ballroom, wearing matching blue gown and suit..As “Hotel California)
    (I feel free)
    *The memory fades away, and the camera looks from a far angle
    lana surveys the area..where not a single other person is in sight. Only slight morning fog surround the area.
    (God Knows I Lived)
    *A flash of light fills the screen, then gradually reveals the next scene
    The lovers drive away from the church, cans dragging behind the little bullet car. Off into the sunset
    (God Knows I Tried)
    *Another flash, and it gradually fades back into the hazy sky, and the camera pans back downwards to the her as she sits up against a Headstone. Her back hiding the name. Mascara driven tears streak her face.
    *The screen fades to black…then slowly reveals the next scene
    (Sometimes I wake up)
    She wakes up on a bed in a hotel room, as red blue and yellow lights shine in from the glass balcony slide door…shining directly upon her as she looks around the empty room. Her man…no where to be found.
    (On Monday, they destroyed me)
    she cries..begging on her knees as her lover (wearing an all black suit, with a briefcase in hand) leaves the room.
    ~Timelapse~
    The timelapse shows her crying and drinking herself unconscious over the next few days(Monday through Thursday) and on the last day (Friday), she finally cleans up a little and leaves the hotel.
    *Timelapse ends
    (Put on that hotel California, wear my blinders in the rain)
    She walks on the sidewalk, barely escaping the rain. wearing a blue coat and a dark blue NY baseball cap and a pair of shades.
    (Ive got nothing much to live for, ever since I found my fame)
    Paparazzi spots her, and cameras flash all around her.
    *The camera moves in close to her side as she shoves the photographers
    You can see her mouth the iconic phrase “Let Me F***ing do what im F***ing doing”
    (God Knows I lived)
    *The sound of lightning and thunder fills the air, and the scene fades into a funeral. Lana, wearing a black dress with a veil, places her hand on top of the closed casket as tears run down her face
    She runs out of the church, and cries on the steps (like the opening scene)
     
    (God Knows I tried)
    A flashback of lana in a dark alley way, holding a dead man in her arms. Crying in the rain.
    *The camera films from above lana, as she sings the final line “God knows I tried”.
    Sidenote: I was thinking the man she loved, was Salvatore. And that in her new short film or whatever, these two songs tie in together. And that the video for Salvatore would come before this and also feauture the full wedding scene.
  12. delreyfreak liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Burnt Norton Video Coming!   
    Yeah, I added that part last minute, because I wasn't sure how to use the "I've got nothing much to love for, ever since I found my fame" line. But thanks so much to you and everyone who read and gave feed back. I also have screenplays for 24, Art Deco, and Swan Song
  13. American Bottom liked a post in a topic by BlueJeans in Burnt Norton Video Coming!   
    I'm not a fan of the ending with the paparazzi, I feel that it would be better if the scenario stuck with one universe, but that's just me ! The rest, I was so drawn into the story with the colors and the descriptions and the song playing in my ears ... If you have more scenarios like this one for LDR songs, make a thread, I'm sure a lot would love to read them, including me ! 
  14. American Bottom liked a post in a topic by GangstaBoy in Burnt Norton Video Coming!   
    @Shadesofkool822
     
    It's so cinematic I love it thanks for sharing dear
  15. AngelHeadedHipster liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Burnt Norton Video Coming!   
    @@GangstaBoy i finally typed up the screenplay for GKIT. 
    (Intro)
    Montage of a funeral, and lana in a veil crying on the steps of a church.
    (Sometimes I wake up…)
    She awakens in a cemetery, with a red rose in her hands, and dried blood from holding the thorns tightly. She wears a blue wedding dress. The sky is a hazy yellow color. 
    *The camera pans upwards towards the hazy sky, and the scene disintegrates into a flashback of a wedding.
    (Its so crazy..)
    The bride and groom intertwine their arms, and share glasses of wine.
    (Put on that Hotel California)
    The lovers dance slowly in the center of the ballroom, wearing matching blue gown and suit..As “Hotel California)
    (I feel free)
    *The memory fades away, and the camera looks from a far angle
    lana surveys the area..where not a single other person is in sight. Only slight morning fog surround the area.
    (God Knows I Lived)
    *A flash of light fills the screen, then gradually reveals the next scene
    The lovers drive away from the church, cans dragging behind the little bullet car. Off into the sunset
    (God Knows I Tried)
    *Another flash, and it gradually fades back into the hazy sky, and the camera pans back downwards to the her as she sits up against a Headstone. Her back hiding the name. Mascara driven tears streak her face.
    *The screen fades to black…then slowly reveals the next scene
    (Sometimes I wake up)
    She wakes up on a bed in a hotel room, as red blue and yellow lights shine in from the glass balcony slide door…shining directly upon her as she looks around the empty room. Her man…no where to be found.
    (On Monday, they destroyed me)
    she cries..begging on her knees as her lover (wearing an all black suit, with a briefcase in hand) leaves the room. 
    ~Timelapse~
    The timelapse shows her crying and drinking herself unconscious over the next few days(Monday through Thursday) and on the last day (Friday), she finally cleans up a little and leaves the hotel.
    *Timelapse ends
    (Put on that hotel California, wear my blinders in the rain)
    She walks on the sidewalk, barely escaping the rain. wearing a blue coat and a dark blue NY baseball cap and a pair of shades. 
    (Ive got nothing much to live for, ever since I found my fame)
    Paparazzi spots her, and cameras flash all around her. 
    *The camera moves in close to her side as she shoves the photographers
    You can see her mouth the iconic phrase “Let Me F***ing do what im F***ing doing”
    (God Knows I lived)
    *The sound of lightning and thunder fills the air, and the scene fades into a funeral. Lana, wearing a black dress with a veil, places her hand on top of the closed casket as tears run down her face
    She runs out of the church, and cries on the steps (like the opening scene)
     
    (God Knows I tried)
    A flashback of lana in a dark alley way, holding a dead man in her arms. Crying in the rain.
    *The camera films from above lana, as she sings the final line “God knows I tried”.
    Sidenote: I was thinking the man she loved, was Salvatore. And that in her new short film or whatever, these two songs tie in together. And that the video for Salvatore would come before this and also feauture the full wedding scene.  
  16. Thunder Revenant liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Burnt Norton Video Coming!   
    @@GangstaBoy i finally typed up the screenplay for GKIT. 
    (Intro)
    Montage of a funeral, and lana in a veil crying on the steps of a church.
    (Sometimes I wake up…)
    She awakens in a cemetery, with a red rose in her hands, and dried blood from holding the thorns tightly. She wears a blue wedding dress. The sky is a hazy yellow color. 
    *The camera pans upwards towards the hazy sky, and the scene disintegrates into a flashback of a wedding.
    (Its so crazy..)
    The bride and groom intertwine their arms, and share glasses of wine.
    (Put on that Hotel California)
    The lovers dance slowly in the center of the ballroom, wearing matching blue gown and suit..As “Hotel California)
    (I feel free)
    *The memory fades away, and the camera looks from a far angle
    lana surveys the area..where not a single other person is in sight. Only slight morning fog surround the area.
    (God Knows I Lived)
    *A flash of light fills the screen, then gradually reveals the next scene
    The lovers drive away from the church, cans dragging behind the little bullet car. Off into the sunset
    (God Knows I Tried)
    *Another flash, and it gradually fades back into the hazy sky, and the camera pans back downwards to the her as she sits up against a Headstone. Her back hiding the name. Mascara driven tears streak her face.
    *The screen fades to black…then slowly reveals the next scene
    (Sometimes I wake up)
    She wakes up on a bed in a hotel room, as red blue and yellow lights shine in from the glass balcony slide door…shining directly upon her as she looks around the empty room. Her man…no where to be found.
    (On Monday, they destroyed me)
    she cries..begging on her knees as her lover (wearing an all black suit, with a briefcase in hand) leaves the room. 
    ~Timelapse~
    The timelapse shows her crying and drinking herself unconscious over the next few days(Monday through Thursday) and on the last day (Friday), she finally cleans up a little and leaves the hotel.
    *Timelapse ends
    (Put on that hotel California, wear my blinders in the rain)
    She walks on the sidewalk, barely escaping the rain. wearing a blue coat and a dark blue NY baseball cap and a pair of shades. 
    (Ive got nothing much to live for, ever since I found my fame)
    Paparazzi spots her, and cameras flash all around her. 
    *The camera moves in close to her side as she shoves the photographers
    You can see her mouth the iconic phrase “Let Me F***ing do what im F***ing doing”
    (God Knows I lived)
    *The sound of lightning and thunder fills the air, and the scene fades into a funeral. Lana, wearing a black dress with a veil, places her hand on top of the closed casket as tears run down her face
    She runs out of the church, and cries on the steps (like the opening scene)
     
    (God Knows I tried)
    A flashback of lana in a dark alley way, holding a dead man in her arms. Crying in the rain.
    *The camera films from above lana, as she sings the final line “God knows I tried”.
    Sidenote: I was thinking the man she loved, was Salvatore. And that in her new short film or whatever, these two songs tie in together. And that the video for Salvatore would come before this and also feauture the full wedding scene.  
  17. InTheSummer liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Burnt Norton Video Coming!   
    @@GangstaBoy i finally typed up the screenplay for GKIT. 
    (Intro)
    Montage of a funeral, and lana in a veil crying on the steps of a church.
    (Sometimes I wake up…)
    She awakens in a cemetery, with a red rose in her hands, and dried blood from holding the thorns tightly. She wears a blue wedding dress. The sky is a hazy yellow color. 
    *The camera pans upwards towards the hazy sky, and the scene disintegrates into a flashback of a wedding.
    (Its so crazy..)
    The bride and groom intertwine their arms, and share glasses of wine.
    (Put on that Hotel California)
    The lovers dance slowly in the center of the ballroom, wearing matching blue gown and suit..As “Hotel California)
    (I feel free)
    *The memory fades away, and the camera looks from a far angle
    lana surveys the area..where not a single other person is in sight. Only slight morning fog surround the area.
    (God Knows I Lived)
    *A flash of light fills the screen, then gradually reveals the next scene
    The lovers drive away from the church, cans dragging behind the little bullet car. Off into the sunset
    (God Knows I Tried)
    *Another flash, and it gradually fades back into the hazy sky, and the camera pans back downwards to the her as she sits up against a Headstone. Her back hiding the name. Mascara driven tears streak her face.
    *The screen fades to black…then slowly reveals the next scene
    (Sometimes I wake up)
    She wakes up on a bed in a hotel room, as red blue and yellow lights shine in from the glass balcony slide door…shining directly upon her as she looks around the empty room. Her man…no where to be found.
    (On Monday, they destroyed me)
    she cries..begging on her knees as her lover (wearing an all black suit, with a briefcase in hand) leaves the room. 
    ~Timelapse~
    The timelapse shows her crying and drinking herself unconscious over the next few days(Monday through Thursday) and on the last day (Friday), she finally cleans up a little and leaves the hotel.
    *Timelapse ends
    (Put on that hotel California, wear my blinders in the rain)
    She walks on the sidewalk, barely escaping the rain. wearing a blue coat and a dark blue NY baseball cap and a pair of shades. 
    (Ive got nothing much to live for, ever since I found my fame)
    Paparazzi spots her, and cameras flash all around her. 
    *The camera moves in close to her side as she shoves the photographers
    You can see her mouth the iconic phrase “Let Me F***ing do what im F***ing doing”
    (God Knows I lived)
    *The sound of lightning and thunder fills the air, and the scene fades into a funeral. Lana, wearing a black dress with a veil, places her hand on top of the closed casket as tears run down her face
    She runs out of the church, and cries on the steps (like the opening scene)
     
    (God Knows I tried)
    A flashback of lana in a dark alley way, holding a dead man in her arms. Crying in the rain.
    *The camera films from above lana, as she sings the final line “God knows I tried”.
    Sidenote: I was thinking the man she loved, was Salvatore. And that in her new short film or whatever, these two songs tie in together. And that the video for Salvatore would come before this and also feauture the full wedding scene.  
  18. delreyfreak liked a post in a topic by American Bottom in Burnt Norton Video Coming!   
    OMG thanks. lol i though it was a little bland. 
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