Dark Angel 203,534 Posted October 29, 2022 also, i'll be stylist for when we all make our red carpet appearances! 8 Quote 𝕚 ' 𝕝 𝕝 𝕙 𝕒 𝕧 𝕖 𝕒 𝕓 𝕝 𝕦 𝕖 𝕔 𝕙 𝕣 𝕚 𝕤 𝕥 𝕞 𝕒 𝕤 ⋆ ꙳ •̩̩͙ ❅ *̩̩͙ ‧͙ ‧͙ *̩̩͙ ❆ ͙͛ ˚ ₊ ⋆ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lili 3,178 Posted October 29, 2022 6 minutes ago, Surf Noir said: also, i'll be stylist for when we all make our red carpet appearances! Oooo we’re in good hands I mean they’re basically handing out Grammies like gum these days, they might as well just give us the Song of the Year 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Glitter Boy 16,616 Posted October 29, 2022 help the concept instrumental sounds so bad i wanna cry this is gonna be a mess omgomgomgomg i hate it it originally had potential but now it just sucks and i might need to start from scratch i ruined it with some weird pop-like drums and a couple arps and now i can't unhear it sorry guys this is going to take longer or a different producer im crying 0 Quote "I'm wild, I'm free, no man can handle me" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Beautiful Loser 49,664 Posted October 29, 2022 Don’t worry, scratch it if you really have to! 4 Quote LB DEMOGRAPHICS SURVEY 2024 | SECRET SANTA 2024 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark Angel 203,534 Posted October 29, 2022 1 minute ago, Glitter Boy said: help the concept instrumental sounds so bad i wanna cry this is gonna be a mess omgomgomgomg i hate it it originally had potential but now it just sucks and i might need to start from scratch i ruined it with some weird pop-like drums and a couple arps and now i can't unhear it sorry guys this is going to take longer or a different producer im crying you obviously don't have to, but i would share it anyway! maybe it's not as bad as you think lol are you able to remove the drums and harps? honestly that concept sounds cool 2 Quote 𝕚 ' 𝕝 𝕝 𝕙 𝕒 𝕧 𝕖 𝕒 𝕓 𝕝 𝕦 𝕖 𝕔 𝕙 𝕣 𝕚 𝕤 𝕥 𝕞 𝕒 𝕤 ⋆ ꙳ •̩̩͙ ❅ *̩̩͙ ‧͙ ‧͙ *̩̩͙ ❆ ͙͛ ˚ ₊ ⋆ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Glitter Boy 16,616 Posted October 29, 2022 Just now, Surf Noir said: you obviously don't have to, but i would share it anyway! maybe it's not as bad as you think lol are you able to remove the drums and harps? honestly that concept sounds cool i think i will post till first chorus, while i work on the second half of the song. the arpeggios make it sound, er, a little too much of synthpop for her usual style and it completely deviates from the original vibe, so lemme export and post real quick 3 Quote "I'm wild, I'm free, no man can handle me" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark Angel 203,534 Posted October 29, 2022 2 minutes ago, Glitter Boy said: i think i will post till first chorus, while i work on the second half of the song. the arpeggios make it sound, er, a little too much of synthpop for her usual style and it completely deviates from the original vibe, so lemme export and post real quick just think of it as an early demo, it wouldn't be unusual to start again from scratch based on that concept and rework it into something better! 3 Quote 𝕚 ' 𝕝 𝕝 𝕙 𝕒 𝕧 𝕖 𝕒 𝕓 𝕝 𝕦 𝕖 𝕔 𝕙 𝕣 𝕚 𝕤 𝕥 𝕞 𝕒 𝕤 ⋆ ꙳ •̩̩͙ ❅ *̩̩͙ ‧͙ ‧͙ *̩̩͙ ❆ ͙͛ ˚ ₊ ⋆ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingsMotelPart2 614 Posted October 29, 2022 7 minutes ago, Glitter Boy said: help the concept instrumental sounds so bad i wanna cry this is gonna be a mess omgomgomgomg i hate it it originally had potential but now it just sucks and i might need to start from scratch i ruined it with some weird pop-like drums and a couple arps and now i can't unhear it sorry guys this is going to take longer or a different producer im crying Don't worry, I understand perfectly, I once tried to do something on FL Studio and ended up with a broken head, but it can always be fixed, so cheer up, and I send you lots of love and good vibes!!!! 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Glitter Boy 16,616 Posted October 29, 2022 OKAY so here's the first concept demo for the instrumental. Tried to follow some of what's been said regarding the sound, but it still needs A LOT of work done with it. I will try and rework it asap. Rough af, not even mixed properly but you can get the vibe i guess? it's just the first half and will get bigger towards the second half. Any feedback is more than welcome! idea 1 instrumental 3 minutes ago, KingsMotelPart2 said: Don't worry, I understand perfectly, I once tried to do something on FL Studio and ended up with a broken head, but it can always be fixed, so cheer up, and I send you lots of love and good vibes!!!! thanks a lot babes! probably if i let it rest for a little and come back with renewed energies i can make it work. will give it a try tomorrow along with the comments y'all provide! <3 9 Quote "I'm wild, I'm free, no man can handle me" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wait For Life 16,825 Posted October 29, 2022 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingsMotelPart2 614 Posted October 29, 2022 4 minutes ago, Glitter Boy said: OKAY so here's the first concept demo for the instrumental. Tried to follow some of what's been said regarding the sound, but it still needs A LOT of work done with it. I will try and rework it asap. Rough af, not even mixed properly but you can get the vibe i guess? it's just the first half and will get bigger towards the second half. Any feedback is more than welcome! idea 1 instrumental thanks a lot babes! probably if i let it rest for a little and come back with renewed energies i can make it work. will give it a try tomorrow along with the comments y'all provide! <3 That's a great idea! I just listened to it, it sounds very atmospheric, the beginning reminds me a bit of I talk to Jesus!, I even tried it with a random melody I came up with, and it went very smoothly for a first idea 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark Angel 203,534 Posted October 29, 2022 11 minutes ago, Glitter Boy said: OKAY so here's the first concept demo for the instrumental. Tried to follow some of what's been said regarding the sound, but it still needs A LOT of work done with it. I will try and rework it asap. Rough af, not even mixed properly but you can get the vibe i guess? it's just the first half and will get bigger towards the second half. Any feedback is more than welcome! idea 1 instrumental thanks a lot babes! probably if i let it rest for a little and come back with renewed energies i can make it work. will give it a try tomorrow along with the comments y'all provide! <3 wtf THIS IS SO GOOD i could definitely imagine something very cathartic/ultraviolence-esque for the lyrical content, thanks for sharing this with us! although, i think it would be better if it were a little slower, but that's just me lol! 4 Quote 𝕚 ' 𝕝 𝕝 𝕙 𝕒 𝕧 𝕖 𝕒 𝕓 𝕝 𝕦 𝕖 𝕔 𝕙 𝕣 𝕚 𝕤 𝕥 𝕞 𝕒 𝕤 ⋆ ꙳ •̩̩͙ ❅ *̩̩͙ ‧͙ ‧͙ *̩̩͙ ❆ ͙͛ ˚ ₊ ⋆ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingsMotelPart2 614 Posted October 29, 2022 1 minute ago, Surf Noir said: wtf THIS IS SO GOOD i could definitely imagine something very cathartic/ultraviolence-esque for the lyrical content, thanks for sharing this with us! although, i think it would be better if it were a little slower, but that's just me lol! YESSS! Perhaps my suggestion would be to have the iconic western guitars, or some orchestral percussion a la Dan Heath 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark Angel 203,534 Posted October 29, 2022 Just now, KingsMotelPart2 said: YESSS! Perhaps my suggestion would be to have the iconic western guitars, or some orchestral percussion a la Dan Heath yes! some of the other instruments that came in during the middle of that little preview reminded me of guitars, that would be really cool and so reminiscent of her born to die/paradise era! 4 Quote 𝕚 ' 𝕝 𝕝 𝕙 𝕒 𝕧 𝕖 𝕒 𝕓 𝕝 𝕦 𝕖 𝕔 𝕙 𝕣 𝕚 𝕤 𝕥 𝕞 𝕒 𝕤 ⋆ ꙳ •̩̩͙ ❅ *̩̩͙ ‧͙ ‧͙ *̩̩͙ ❆ ͙͛ ˚ ₊ ⋆ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Um Chile Anyways So 7,110 Posted October 30, 2022 this first demo is giving 2012 unreleased vibes and im here for it 4 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
plastiscguy 63,439 Posted October 30, 2022 30 minutes ago, Glitter Boy said: OKAY so here's the first concept demo for the instrumental. Tried to follow some of what's been said regarding the sound, but it still needs A LOT of work done with it. I will try and rework it asap. Rough af, not even mixed properly but you can get the vibe i guess? it's just the first half and will get bigger towards the second half. Any feedback is more than welcome! idea 1 instrumental THIS IS SO EFFING GOOD, WTF May I ask for the chords and BPM of the project, if you don't mind? 5 Quote My rose garden dreams set on fire by fiends... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
plastiscguy 63,439 Posted October 30, 2022 By the way, should we create a group chat or a discord server so we can share the audio files easier? like, maybe have separate channels for each parts of the song, like one for songwriting brainstorm, one for the production, etc? I don't even remember if LB had an official server or not Anyways 4 Quote My rose garden dreams set on fire by fiends... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TRENCH 15,450 Posted October 30, 2022 28 minutes ago, Surf Noir said: wtf THIS IS SO GOOD i could definitely imagine something very cathartic/ultraviolence-esque for the lyrical content, thanks for sharing this with us! although, i think it would be better if it were a little slower, but that's just me lol! omg yes im here for it 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wait For Life 16,825 Posted October 30, 2022 a discord server would be easy aiden#0911 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Glitter Boy 16,616 Posted October 30, 2022 THANK Y'ALL I'M SO GLAD YOU'RE LIKING IT 10 minutes ago, plastiscguy said: THIS IS SO EFFING GOOD, WTF May I ask for the chords and BPM of the project, if you don't mind? UGH LEGEND it means a lot, thanks <3 yup, it's 94 BPM but it will probably be slower considering the very on point suggestion of @Surf Noir, which I also considered first. Spoiler don't k1ll me but I know nothing about chords, lmao. this is what i came up with - applies for piano, strings and that orchestral-esque synth. as for how to read it, i have absolutely no idea 4 minutes ago, plastiscguy said: By the way, should we create a group chat or a discord server so we can share the audio files easier? like, maybe have separate channels for each parts of the song, like one for songwriting brainstorm, one for the production, etc? I don't even remember if LB had an official server or not Anyways yeah, totally! I think that would make it easier to interact and stuff. however i don't really know how to create one 2 Quote "I'm wild, I'm free, no man can handle me" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
