Rorman Nockwell 53,799 Posted October 28, 2022 Is it meant to be a serious song or a piss-take? I'm only good at the latter Spoiler @WilshireBoulevard and I have already written about 20 songs in our "career" as fake lyricists 5 Quote ur legit gonna look the same stop buying oil of Olay face cream Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
palemoonbaby 13,466 Posted October 28, 2022 I'm goddamn melancholic, goddamn dreamer Pink flamingos are bathing in aquamarine waves Just like we jumped in old-fashioned swimsuits That 1972 Whisky on my tongue to forget I could give you my life and breathe even we didn't know each other very well I miss you so much that I hate it I've always fallen in love in wrong time and place I forgave people who drowned me down I was your medicine, you were deadly poison Cocaine fields and the sea of vodka weren't that intoxicating Why do i have to go through everything so fucking emotional Maybe I'm judging myself too brutal Maybe I'm too sadistic and masochist Finding alibi and explanation why is no other way 6 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lili 3,159 Posted October 28, 2022 3 minutes ago, palemoonbaby said: I'm goddamn melancholic, goddamn dreamer Pink flamingos are bathing in aquamarine waves Just like we jumped in old-fashioned swimsuits That 1972 Whisky on my tongue to forget I could give you my life and breathe even we didn't know each other very well I miss you so much that I hate it I've always fallen in love in wrong time and place I forgave people who drowned me down I was your medicine, you were deadly poison Cocaine fields and the sea of vodka weren't that intoxicating Why do i have to go through everything so fucking emotional Maybe I'm judging myself too brutal Maybe I'm too sadistic and masochist Finding alibi and explanation why is no other way Love this! Also I keep updating the original post people, make sure to check it out. I thought once we pile up enough ideas and narrow them down, we can move to the voting process if that's okay with you!! 5 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Beautiful Loser 46,068 Posted October 28, 2022 Quote The Incomparable producers, The Otherworldy singers, The Unbeatable lyrics team, The show-stopping visual team Love this. 1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lili 3,159 Posted October 28, 2022 1 hour ago, Rorman Nockwell said: Is it meant to be a serious song or a piss-take? I'm only good at the latter Reveal hidden contents @WilshireBoulevard and I have already written about 20 songs in our "career" as fake lyricists Serious but also meant to be fun. Not a parody, though, that is our other project together “That Snow Book” remember? 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
annedauphine 34,573 Posted October 28, 2022 Absolutely down to do anything that requires typography 8 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blue Ink 5,897 Posted October 28, 2022 1 hour ago, Rorman Nockwell said: Is it meant to be a serious song or a piss-take? I'm only good at the latter Reveal hidden contents @WilshireBoulevard and I have already written about 20 songs in our "career" as fake lyricists piss-takes or not, the poems you and @lili write in your status updates are iconic and they actually sound like Lana so we'd love to have you here 4 Quote Honey, you make me feel I'm invincible Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lili 3,159 Posted October 28, 2022 36 minutes ago, BlueINK said: piss-takes or not, the poems you and @lili write in your status updates are iconic and they actually sound like Lana so we'd love to have you here Aww thank you! Yes @Rorman Nockwell jump on the lyrics team, will ya? 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lili 3,159 Posted October 28, 2022 Are we going to mention a celebrity? How do you feel about it? (Nikki Lane is not a celebrity) 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Gravitate 3,918 Posted October 28, 2022 I have no talent to contribute but just wanted to say how much I love this idea and it looks promising so far! I can't wait to hear the finished product!! This community is so talented, I'll be cheering y'all on 8 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Beautiful Loser 46,068 Posted October 28, 2022 11 minutes ago, lili said: Are we going to mention a celebrity? How do you feel about it? (Nikki Lane is not a celebrity) I’m voting no. 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lili 3,159 Posted October 28, 2022 5 minutes ago, Gravitate said: I have no talent to contribute but just wanted to say how much I love this idea and it looks promising so far! I can't wait to hear the finished product!! This community is so talented, I'll be cheering y'all on Of course, you have it! Everybody does in some way. Even a word, a comment, a small feedback is appreciated! Thank you! ♥️ 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rorman Nockwell 53,799 Posted October 28, 2022 Let's make this 203 pages long and then scrap it with no explanation It's Lana, after all 16 Quote ur legit gonna look the same stop buying oil of Olay face cream Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoftwareUpgrade 19,230 Posted October 28, 2022 I would request the word "Gate" to be included in the piece, as a nod to Lanaboards and its many gates (ChickenGate, GlitterGate, CrazyGate, etc) 7 Quote I'm Poppy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lili 3,159 Posted October 28, 2022 Should we do an “era” vote in terms of sound so we can have a base from which we can move? How should we proceed? Ideas? 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Surf Noir 189,022 Posted October 28, 2022 8 hours ago, lili said: Are we going to mention a celebrity? How do you feel about it? (Nikki Lane is not a celebrity) somebody classically "lana" such as marilyn, elvis, jim morrison, axl rose, or janis joplin 3 hours ago, lili said: Should we do an “era” vote in terms of sound so we can have a base from which we can move? How should we proceed? Ideas? i vote for born to die/paradise era sound! 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
palemoonbaby 13,466 Posted October 28, 2022 idea for sound: dreamy, dark indie electro-touched song with strings, violins intro: angelic, with strings 1st verse, pre-chorus: dreamy, spacey and really atmospheric 1st chorus: the same but with strings and ends with beat slowly starting 2nd verse, pre-chorus: electro beat entered, interesting production, still dreamy but more intense and kinda dark 2nd chorus: kinda anthemic, more energy but still we crying, drums showing up, vocal layers bridge and last chorus: big climax, baroque strong orchestra, nervous strings, breathtaking outro: same as intro 2 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deadly Nightshade 12,056 Posted October 28, 2022 I always loved the word melancholia , maybe you guys can do your magic and incorporate it in the song some way As for the instrumentation , it would be awesome to have electric guitars in the song 4 Quote 𝑳𝒊𝒇𝒆 𝒊𝒔 𝒃𝒆𝒂𝒖𝒕𝒊𝒇𝒖𝒍 𝒃𝒖𝒕 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒅𝒐𝒏'𝒕 𝒉𝒂𝒗𝒆 𝒂 𝒄𝒍𝒖𝒆 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sempervirens 15,214 Posted October 28, 2022 On 10/27/2022 at 4:05 PM, Nova Times said: so what are we doin? how long are we aiming for? NOT EVERYBODY CAN BE YOUR SON! 3 Quote suffer does the wolf crawling to thee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Surf Noir 189,022 Posted October 28, 2022 4 minutes ago, Deadly Nightshade said: I always loved the word melancholia , maybe you guys can do your magic and incorporate it in the song some way As for the instrumentation , it would be awesome to have electric guitars in the song i said, i love your crazy ways, i miss your gold-chain he said, i love topanga, i miss your melancholia 3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
